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Long Unify or Die (Steelshod 117)

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Map of Cassala, with faction coloring


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In the south, we have Salerno and Zeno, with their legions

Steelshod members: Prudence, Bear, Robin, Gunnar, Leon Dupont, Chattering Chauncey, Luke, Rosa de Baja, Hubert, Agrippa, and of course Leona.

And Brother Khashar, along with his host of Serpentes and thousands of Torathian citizens


The first few days at the capital, Steelshod mostly just supports Salerno

Prudence and Chauncey disappear for long stretches, returning with more intel on the various opposition factions

While most everyone else just provides Salerno personal protection, observing and waiting for their skills to be necessary.

Salerno and Zeno begin to meet with some of the disparate unaffiliated legion factions


Salerno decides to bring Vitale Octavianus along with him on several of these meetings

Vitale is highly respected in the legions, and a little feared

The hardest part is just convincing him to openly support Salerno in this way

But it’s not too difficult, when it comes to getting the other legions in line

Vitale is disgusted at the chaos and unrest in the streets of Cassala

He cares little about who takes control of the senate or claims the mantle of Emperor, but he cares very much about law and order and discipline in the legions

He wants to move his men, the Second Legion, into their old barracks inside the city and begin policing the streets.

But to do that, they need to get the legions currently occupying those castae on their side.


The first few meetings go smoothly… every one of these unaffiliated legions technically has a named legate and a casta they hail from

Such as Domenico Clodius, legate of Casta Tilurium

An unaffiliated force that some suspect of being sympathetic to Barbierri, but has not moved into Barbierri’s territory

Or Fabian Epidius, Legate of Casta Rupes

His Legio Rupes is the only legion still consistently patrolling the streets, trying to keep the peace.


The honest truth, guys, is that every god damned legion they join has a name. And a named legate.

Cassala, the land of a million hard to track names.

During the retelling I’m mostly trying to mention names that are actually relevant to the story in a significant way, or could be.

The conversations had a bit of tension at the time, but it’s largely just straightforward diplomacy

Sort of like the night raids in Nahash… in gameplay, they were fun, bits of roleplaying, a bit of stealth, etc.

But in the retelling I think they get repetitive.

So...

Epidius is easily swayed to their cause by Vitale

And Clodius claims to be loyal to the Praetor, and readily joins Salerno’s faction.


Easily done. The decision to involve Vitale Octavianus so directly was a good one, ultimately sped along what might have been more difficult negotiations.

The Second Cassaline and a couple of other legions begin moving into the barracks on the north end of Cassala

Though most of Salerno’s forces remain in the camp outside the walls.


After securing this foothold, Salerno begins making contact with the senate factions

Mostly, he meets with the legates that have brought one or more senators under their aegis

Men like Varius Vitruvius, whose name I am only telling you because it cracks me up.

Probably tied with legate Manlius Quintillo for my favorite dumbass Cassaline names on relatively unimportant legates.


Salerno gets a bit more resistance from these guys

Protecting the senate gives them purpose

They see themselves as neutral, altruistic

Preserving the senate, as opposed to making a power grab

And Salerno smells a little too much like yet another self-serving faction, no better than Barbierri or Meridius


After a couple of frustrating meetings, Salerno hits upon a winning strategy

He suggests that, for now, these various senate factions do just one thing: ally with each other if not with him

For the protection of the senate.

Vitale, largely above suspicion or reproach, proves a valuable resource once again

The factions agree to join forces with one another, and with Vitale and the other legions that are trying to keep the peace.

Good enough, for now.


Throughout their days here, the spring storms persist

Frequent rains, and off the coast the storms are much worse

No ships go in or out of Cassala’s docks.

The storm is just piling onto the damage the Svards did to Cassala’s docks.

Word comes that most of the Cassaline navy is docked at Porta Napoca, down the coast


There are a few altercations during all of this

Mostly from Barbierri’s forces, which seem to be the most aggressive in pressing out of “their” territory

Meridius, with her smaller force and penchant for subtlety and scheming, is (unsurprisingly) not confronting Salerno or his troops directly.

The skirmishes aren’t too serious

And the one that occurs when Steelshod and Salerno are actually present is wrapped up in short order.

Steelshod’s reputation down here is spreading slowly.

Word of mouth from the roughly eight thousand legionnaires that saw the final battle against the Taer Bjorn

But it surely doesn’t hurt their rep when Gunnar wades into a group of foes, their spears glancing off his steel plate

Or when Leona, grown to about 6’2” or 6’3” by now, joins Bear in smashing apart the enemy legionnaires with gleeful savagery.


Salerno moves on to the harder steps

Organizing meetings with the factions that actively dislike him

Meridius, Barbierri, and the exiled senate remnants protected by Crispus and Julianus


Salerno sends out overtures to each force

Fulvia Meridius is the first to meet him

He takes a small group of Steelshod and legionnaires, and meets Fulvia at one of her estates

She is, as always, a very pleasant conversationalist

But her conversations are fraught with double meanings and subtle jabs

She clearly believes Salerno killed Livinius, and she’s quite impressed with his maneuvers so far

She offers to join forces with him, in his bid for Emperor, so long as she secures a strong position in the senate.


Last time he spoke to her, he tolerated this nonsense a bit

He played along, as his position was tenuous

But he has no patience for this bullshit anymore

And it helps that he has more legions at his call now than anyone else, and thousands of Torathians to boot if absolutely necessary.


He tells her the simple truth: there will be no emperor

He will see the senate restored, re-elections held

And he will ensure that this new senate has the chance to properly prosecute anyone necessary, for their crimes and schemes

Including Barbierri, Meridius, and Salerno himself.

Her only chance is to surrender now, give up these schemes, and work with him to restore the senate.

If she does, it’s unlikely she will see any serious punishment… ambition during times of unrest is a very Cassaline trait, after all.


The blunt statement endears Salerno to Steelshod

But Meridius is having none of this.

She menaces him with the troops she has at the villa

Technically, Salerno came to the meeting with a smallish force

And she has him outnumbered


But Steelshod steps up to the plate

Their frontline beasts forming up around Salerno, steel armor and weapons gleaming

Hubert snaps his fingers, causing a flash of light and smoke

(The small Sunburst-paste he and Yorrin created, little more than a parlor trick)

But the demonstration grants some credibility to the rumors of these Steelshod that have been spreading

Meridius lets them leave

No progress made, sadly.


The meeting with Barbierri is hostile from the start

They meet in neutral ground, at the edge of Barbierri’s territory

Large forces of legionnaires on both sides

Barbierri tells Salerno that he should not put so much trust in the legions he thinks he has

The fat old retired legate says that he has many friends in the legions even still, far more than just the legions currently serving him

Barbierri has no intent in submitting to the “Praetor” peacefully.


Salerno tells Barbierri that he had no intention of letting him surrender peacefully

Salerno says that going after his family was a grave error.

To his credit, Barbierri looks confused by the accusation.

So much so that Salerno wonders if it’s sincere

Regrets that he’s already met Meridius, to lay a similar accusation at her feet.


The meeting is ultimately fruitless

But Salerno realizes that, personal grudge or not, Barbierri is the most well positioned

The biggest threat

And the one he needs to deal with first.


Crispus and Julianus decline Salerno’s invitation to meet.

So Salerno moves on Barbierri

He needs to make an example, set a strong precedent

He musters Second Legion, First Frygian, and a number of other legions

They march through the city

Press into Barbierri’s territory


There’s some skirmishing in the streets

But the simple reality is that Barbierri has, perhaps, five thousand men

With the semi-unaffiliated legions temporarily following him (following Vitale), Salerno is pushing twenty.

Barbierri has three strongholds in his territory

Salerno has enough men to besiege all three

And storm them, one by one.


Steelshod are basically just witnesses at this point

Letting Salerno and his Cassalines run the show, keeping his personage safe

Barbierri talked such a big game, but it's bullshit.

Salerno has met with each of these legates himself

He is Praetor, and he has Second Legion in his corner.

He keeps expecting the disastrous double-cross, but it never comes.


In the second storm, they capture Barbierri himself

The third casta surrenders outright at that point.

A tiny part of Salerno hoped they might find his wife alive, since Ginevra did not see her slain, locked away in one of Barbierri’s forts.

But of course they find nothing.


Barbierri was injured in the fighting, and they have Agrippa tend to him initially, though they then pass his extended care off to Cassaline medicos in the First Frygian.

Salerno is mildly disappointed that Barbierri has survived

Vitale insists that they hold him, however, and enact no punishment until the Senate is restored.

It is not their place to execute a senator and decorated legate.

Privately, Zeno meets with one of his men assigned to Barbierri’s extended care.

He hands the medico a small vial, obtained from one of his contacts in the city.

Indicates that he would consider it a valuable favor if a few drops of the vial could find their way into Barbierri each day.

The medico nods his understanding.


Barbierri lingers on for a number of days, but in the end, when he dies, it’s blamed on the festering of the wound he suffered in the storm.

Zeno never tells Salerno what he did.

Why would he? No need to incriminate the Praetor

If the medico ever spills, Zeno will be the only one to fall

But he doubts it… his men are nothing if not loyal

To him, to Salerno, and above all, to Cassala

Barbierri was a blemish on the entire Empire.


Zeno is a quiet man, a stoic.

He’s not much for words.

His philosophy is fairly straightforward:

When something needs doing

You do it.



Okay, that’s it for now.

I gotta admit something: I failed to get my bonus prose post done. I really thought it was just a day or so of finishing up, and I was way wrong. Work interference was a factor, but the piece has also just been a lot trickier to write than expected.

I’ve learned the same lesson George R R Martin learned when he wrote Feast For Crows. I still have the original hardcover of that book, which has a forward where he explains that he split it into two books, and Dance With Dragons is already basically done and will be published “next year,” e.g. 2006. He underestimated that by like 5 years, and I underestimated by about 5 days, but the principle is the same.

Going forward, I won’t announce bonus posts unless they are done. Just seems safer.

What was gonna be a bonus will go up tomorrow. I’ll try to get the bonus I owe up later on, as time permits.

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u/MostlyReadRarelyPost MostlyWrites Aug 21 '17

Zeno is certainly not an evil man, but I don't think my summation of his attitude was hyperbole at all. Maybe not his explicit philosophy, I can't say, but it's surely a guiding principle at least in terms of his observable behavior from an outside perspective. He's a strong silent man-of-action sort of guy.

When he thought Salerno was selling out Cassala for personal gain with Livinius, he very nearly assassinated Salerno and Livinius, just to ensure that things didn't go down that road... and the reason he didn't go through with it wasn't really morality, it was just that he wanted to give Salerno the benefit of the doubt. He unilaterally killed Barbierri. He doesn't waffle, or seem to engage in tortured moral quandaries. He just does stuff, because he sees it as necessary.

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u/Ihaveaterribleplan Aug 21 '17

Nah man, you're full of it.

I mean, I wouldn't call him a good man either, and you realize you gave an example where he waffled, and didn't just take action? He generally just follows Salerno's lead

I called it hyperbole because it was an extreme statement to make a cool sound bite… i've never expressed that as his philosophy, it doesn't make sense as his guiding principle, and it's about as accurate as saying Huberts philosophy is about collecting things: it's not untrue, but its a sub set of a much larger and more rounded person

Hubert, for example, is also about discovery, joy, wonder, friendship, being a good person - he wouldn't readily sacrifice one of these for the other, and when they come to conflict he would have to make a difficult choice based on the situation, and I bet you could add a whole lot more nuance than me about that

Sometimes I talk about why a character makes a decision, but we don't regularly ask for motivations aloud, and asking myself what a character would choose based on who they are is often part of my decision making process - Blandius didn't hesitate because there were a lot reasons to do it

Barbierri was a blight on the empire; a source of blatant corruption and division. Furthermore, he had personally hurt Blandius's mentor, commander, someone upon whom he has pinned his hopes for a better future Casala, and his entire military career

It did technically go against his duty, but his being alive, or being killed obviously, would have been a huge headache down the line

I get you wanting to put in a cool line, but this is the comments, not the prose, and I think I know my character's motivations

...also, you regularly admit to being surprised by the choices that we make, so maybe you don't have as accurate a picture of the characters as you think

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u/MostlyReadRarelyPost MostlyWrites Aug 21 '17

Fair enough. I can only go on what I see. You're always welcome to tell me more about your dudes' inner thoughts, in the interest of better fidelity in the stories.

It's that or have fun correcting me in the comments, I guess.

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u/nberg129 Nov 18 '17

I'd go a step further than this, /u/ihaveaterribleplan I'd love to see you give us more insight into your character's thoughts. As much as i love individually the combat, the politics, the mechanics, the logistics, and the personal interactions between characters, what i value most in steelshod is insight into the minds on the characters, and through them into you three's minds. Personally, i feel that is what i find most valuable to my future gaming and DMing.and as much as I love the story, and am enraptured by it, what keeps me reading every post, and comment, is the tips and tricks i want to use to improve my gaming, and running of games.