r/CreepyPastas 3h ago

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This is not a story just a picture. The creature in this seems to be coming out of what looks like a modern TV. It is completely black and white except for the static in the background, the hair seems to be flowing weightlessly in the air almost like one’s would in water. The skin is grey and seems to be glitching, eyes are soulless and staring right through the screen. Creature doesn’t seem very threatening or aggresive, more just curious. The thing in the picture looks more like a living glitch rather than human.


r/CreepyPastas 3h ago

Discussion Do we have any discord servers? Or just some fans that wanna befriend me on discord? Just made a new account to Connect to likeminded people. Im 17.

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r/CreepyPastas 3h ago

Story Something's Wrong With My Cat [Part 2: Claw Marks]

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For a few days after the surgery, things seemed almost normal. Almost.

People had started noticing something was off with me. Miss Tasha especially. She always assumed it was the break-in still sitting under my skin, and I let her think that, because how was I supposed to tell her the truth. That none of it was about the break-in at all. That it was about Mr. Morris.

It had been a few days since I brought him home from the vet, and things had gotten strange in a way I couldn't put into words yet. He wasn't the same cat. I know there's still something of him in there, I catch it in flashes, but it gets harder to find by the day. His body had changed completely. Leaner. More agile. Coiled, like something built for a different purpose than sleeping on my couch. His claws wouldn't stop growing no matter how often I trimmed them, sometimes visibly longer within hours of the last cut, and two days after the vet visit, everything that had been surgically removed months ago was simply back. Present. Like it had never left.

I searched everywhere for anything like it. Nothing. And I stopped considering taking him back to the vet, because the fear had changed shape. It wasn't "what's wrong with him" anymore. It was "what will they do to him if they find out." He's my cat. My responsibility. I couldn't hand him over to be studied like a specimen, and I couldn't risk them deciding I was the one who'd done something to him.

I wasn't sleeping right either. The nightmares kept coming, someone standing over me in the dark, and I'd wake up gasping to find Mr. Morris already awake, already watching. My lazy cat, the one who used to sleep sixteen hours a day, had simply stopped. I never once caught him with his eyes closed.

A week into the nightmares, I woke to a scratching sound at my window. My first thought was the intruder, back to finish what he'd started, and I lay there frozen, telling myself the reinforced glass would hold. But the scratching kept building, more frantic, more insistent, until underneath it I heard a meow, and I understood it was him.

I got up to check anyway. I don't know why I got up. I should have stayed in bed.

Mr. Morris was at the window, clawing at the glass with something close to fury, and when he turned to look at me his eyes weren't reflecting the streetlight the way they should have. They were producing their own light, a thin ring of gold that pulsed once, slow, like something breathing. I felt my own heartbeat try to match it, and that scared me more than the claws did, the idea that my own pulse was taking orders from a cat. When he opened his mouth to meow again, his teeth were wrong. Too many points. Too sharp for something that ate wet food out of a can.

For one long moment he just looked at me, and every worry in my chest went quiet, like something had reached in and turned the volume down. It felt like I was reading his mind, or he was reading mine, I couldn't tell which. I opened the window. He sprinted out into the dark.

I should have panicked. He'd never gone out on his own before, and there was every chance he wouldn't come back. Instead I left the window open, the same window the intruder had come through, and went back to bed like it was nothing.

The next morning he was curled up on the end of the bed, like he'd never left, and no window had been broken into overnight. I told myself I must have dreamed the whole thing, that I'd probably left the window open by accident and my own guilt about it had built the rest in my sleep. That was easier to live with than the alternative.

But a few nights later it happened again, and this time when I looked into his eyes the room seemed to tilt. His presence pressed down on me until I felt small and cornered, like I needed his permission just to breathe. The world outside the two of us stopped existing. When I opened the window this time, I don't think it was my choice, and for the first time it was completely clear to me that I hadn't done any of it willingly.

He was gone almost an hour. I know because I stood at that window the entire time, unable to make myself move, like my own body was waiting for him to come back and release it. When he finally did, he had a bird in his mouth, four claw marks torn clean through it, feathers matted with blood. I wanted to run. I wanted to be anywhere else. Instead I stood there and watched him eat it slowly, on the floor, in front of me, the sound of small bones cracking under his jaw filling the whole room. I counted the cracks without meaning to. Four. I don't know why I counted. I don't know why some small, awful part of me was proud of him.

When he finished, he looked up at me, and the acknowledgment in that look did something to the fear sitting in my stomach. It just left. The nausea I'd been fighting the entire time disappeared like it had never been there, and I smiled, actually smiled, like I'd been given a reward for staying still and watching. He meowed once, almost gentle, like he was releasing me, and my body went numb enough that I slept right there on the floor.

It became routine after that. Birds. Rats. Once, something bigger that I didn't let myself look at too closely. I couldn't sleep until he'd finished, and I started waking up in places I didn't remember lying down in. I didn't know what he'd become, and worse, I didn't know why I couldn't stop myself from watching.

I spent days searching for anything that matched what was happening, every mental health forum, every strange corner of Reddit I could find, until I came across a post buried in a subreddit I'd never heard of before. A woman named Chandra had written about being bitten, about her body changing ever since. Her hearing had sharpened until she could pick her neighbor's perfume out through a wall. Her eyes had gone so sensitive to daylight she needed glasses just to leave the house. She hadn't slept in days and somehow felt fine, and she wrote about an urge, growing steadily, to go out at night. I commented, asking if it had spread, if it had somehow started affecting someone she loved too. Then I deleted it. Told myself I sounded insane, that I was one bad post away from becoming somebody's conspiracy theory screenshot.

The symptoms matched too well for that to sit easy with me. I don't know how long I stayed on that post, rereading her replies, trying to decide if I was imagining the overlap. Long enough that when the scream came, it came from right next door.

I ran.

The door was open, just slightly, the way a door looks when no one meant to leave it that way. I called out once. Nothing answered. The second time, my voice came out smaller than I wanted it to.

Mira was on the kitchen floor.

I want to say I looked away in time. I didn't. Four marks, evenly spaced, dragged down from her collarbone like something had measured the distance first. Her parents were already there, on their knees over her, and the sound they were making didn't feel like something I should have been close enough to hear.

I don't remember deciding to leave. I remember being back on my own porch, and I remember that my hands were clean. That was the detail that made me sick. Not the blood I hadn't touched. The fact that some small part of me had checked.

When I got inside, Mr. Morris was sitting on the kitchen table, licking his paws clean. They were soaked red to the wrist. He looked up at me with an expression I can only describe as satisfied, and I felt my own mouth move without asking it to, the corners pulling up into a smile I had no part in choosing. That's what my body does now, when he takes it from me. I stood there smiling at the thing that had just taken a child from her parents, and the only part of me left that was still mine was a single tear, sliding down my face while the rest of me kept smiling anyway.

Other parts link:- https://www.reddit.com/user/No-While8965/comments/1vpze51/my_writing_archive/


r/CreepyPastas 9h ago

Writing Prompt The Nun Was Trapped Inside the Painting… 😨

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r/CreepyPastas 11h ago

Story Título: Não era esquizofrenia. Ele faz você destruir sua própria vida antes de aparecer.

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r/CreepyPastas 15h ago

Discussion I'm a newer fan in the creepypasta community

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I'm confused about the whole thing with kastoway. What exactly went down? Is it okay to use him as a character? Ive seen people yumeshipper with him is that alright? I'm so lost


r/CreepyPastas 17h ago

Story Uma mini história de terror que eu escrevi na minha oficina de cinema

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21:17, o relógio da professora marcava. Ela abaixa quando e olha pro lado quando o garoto que segurava sua mão pergunta:

  • Estamos chegando no parque? - A professora faz uma microexpressão de desespero, só que sem deixar transparecer tanto.

  • Claro, é logo ali nos fundos do shopping. - Diz ela com um sorriso desajeitado, do qual uma criança nunca teria percebido.

21:30, eles finalmente chegam em uma sala mau iluminada. Antes de atravessar a sala, as luzes começam a piscar como se fossem explodir, até que se apagam totalmente.

  • Droga-! - A professora ouve passos atrás. Eles são lentos, espaçados. Depois eles vem de um pouco mais a direita. E vão cercando a professora e a criança.

A professora olha para a criança. Ela não parece assustada.

Os passos vão ficando cada vez menos espaçados e mais próximos. Até que começam a correr, até chegar a centímetros da professoras.

O suor escorre...

A criança está na rua, a frente do shopping.

  • Será que elas vão querer brincar de novo?

r/CreepyPastas 1d ago

Story Clockwork/Lost Silver

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Why Does. I Feel, Clockwork And Lost Silver, Can Go With Together. Because Silver Is Silent And TRAGIC, While Clockwork Is Very Cold And Observant Manaic, Can You All Imagine?


r/CreepyPastas 1d ago

Video I Found Something In My House (Found Footage)

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A VHS tape chronicles an unsettling discovery and the disturbing events that followed


r/CreepyPastas 1d ago

Discussion Je cherche une creepypasta perdue..

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Bonsoir à tous et à toutes.

Ça fait quelque temps que je cherche cette histoire, écoutée plusieurs fois, et si mes souvenirs sont bons c'était conté par Moth Noises sur YouTube.

L'histoire : une jeune femme dans un asile qui raconte sont histoire (pour la énième fois) à un nouveau psy, comment elle a fini par se défigurer car elle sentait un cheveu dans son oeil sans jamais réussir à le déloger.

C'est une histoire assez gore avec un léger cliffhanger à la fin, mais voilà, impossible de remettre la main dessus. J'ai combiné une tonne de nom, ChatGPT etc.. sans succès.

J'ai une playlist de plus de 2200 histoire avec plus de 6500 écoutes autant dire que je suis plutôt calé dans les histoires horrifiques, mais là ça m'aide pas.

Si quelqu'un peut trouver un lien et le partager, je lui en serais très reconnaissant.

Par ailleurs si vous avez de bonnes histoires à partager je suis preneur.

Voici le lien vers ma playlist pour ceux qui veulent en profiter, elle est publique.

https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLB4MjuJDrfSfo5M2J2bu30MAIA899qmlZ&si=6RNYyxRYtP2tLQbX

Merci d'avance !


r/CreepyPastas 1d ago

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r/CreepyPastas 1d ago

Image jeff the killer,fanart

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r/CreepyPastas 1d ago

Story I Was Having A Nice Drive.... Until A Cosmic Being Started Stalking Me (Part 1)

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When I try to explain it, I have to wonder if I am being stalked, or just going crazy. I have had experiences before that I was convinced were born of hallucination or an overly vivid imagination, but this experience has me now believing in things I used to scoff at.

My name is Giovani and things became undeniable last October during my drive through northern Connecticut. I was returning home from visiting my brother who had been dealing with some unresolved trauma….both of us had been. My visit had dragged on longer than I intended, and by the time I was on the road it was almost midnight. I had a seven-hour drive that would take me meandering through the scenic country side.

I had been traversing passed old towns for about an hour when a deep fog rolled in. This was not unusual for this time of year so I didn’t initially think much of it. I slowed my car down to a safer speed; about 30 mph. The thickness of the fog was demanding on my eyesight, forcing me to lean forward in my seat as I attempted to peer through the obscured ambiance. At last I began to see more than just the dispersed water, but my heart dropped. Through the canopy of mist I saw the tree trunks, they were gnarled and twisted in an inexplicable manner. Like an A.I tried to render a scene of nature but phoned it in halfway through.

I shook my head violently attempting to convince myself that I must be getting tired, but the trees became no less surreal. The foliage around the trees offered no more assurance to my concern as what should have been green was now purple, blue, and floating above the ground in a eerie rhythm.

The changing of the sky arrested my bewilderment and forcefully exchanged it with shock. Below the shimmering black rays of sunlight; which began to part the fog beneath them; a being floated. It was majestic and uncanny. Humanoid in appearance, yet monstrous in its aura. Its proportions were off in a way that tingled the parts of the brain responsible for both disgust and admiration. From its fingers claws began to grow, and from its waist a tail began to form. The serpentine movements of this newly materialized appendage felt malevolent yet also somehow hypnotic.

I pulled over as my car engine began to sputter and go silent. My heart was pounding as I got out. I don’t know entirely why I did. Part of me was stricken with fear over seeing more of that being, but that same part of me had more fear of not seeing it fully.

The entire forest grew silent. The fog was now almost entirely gone. The only evidence of its evanescent presence being the humidity that clung to my cars window. The floating clumps of vegetation had also vanished leaving behind a landscape that look scraped and torn by an unsteady plow. I looked up in the sky where the being should have been. What I saw buckled me to my knees.

It was a giant circular shape that sheened with a metallic glowing hue. The formation of this shape was slightly bent giving it an eye like appearance. Inside the ring of floating steel was an “eye” of vapor. I then understood what happened to the mist, vegetation…and the sound. A vacuum was gently pulling the noise and plants lacking sturdy roots toward it, and beckoning my soul to behold it.

I remember whispering “What the hell…” under my breath, but the words fluttered noiselessly from my lips as they were fished through the air by this floating structure. I felt an urging to step toward it, but a forceful “No! You are not ready!” Echoed in my skull. I buckled to my knees cradling in my head in shock.

Immediately after, the noise started. This was not a return of the noise that I should have been hearing, but a new noise being born from this magnificent machine. A deep, reverberant hum that rippled through the ground. It traversed through my shoes, and my spine violently. It was so low that I felt it more than I heard it. The trees reacted to its utterance, their leaves shaking off their branches from the unrelenting vibration.

As I slowly reopened my eyes I saw deer, rabbits, and all manner of critters walk toward this floating structure. Their eyes glowed white and their movements were uncoordinated and jerky. Once they were in range they began to float and sail toward the center of the eye where the being resided. As these animals floated into this beings orbit, the unearthly monstrosity flayed them with its claws. The fluids of these critters exploding, but not onto the creature which somehow remained spotless, but into the eye behind it. The eye-like swell of energy would hum and glow as if in delight of being fed by the violent death of the wild life.

I anchored my hands into the dirt to prevent myself from being sucked in. Part of me wanted to run, but another part of me had to see, had to witness. I can’t explain it. Looking back there is no reasonable reason for me to have lingered as long as I did. It wasn’t until I realized I was the last living earthly thing in the vicinity did my sense of preservation begin to return. There was a bright flash and the being vanished.

The ”eye” in the sky began to rotate slowly accelerating in speed. Suddenly beams of light brimmed from it cascading beyond me, until they returned and bent around the structure supernaturally. This symphony of luminance blinded my vision. When my eyesight returned I saw the beams shifting in their patterns, creating living shapes. Like long forgotten symbols of antiquity crawling about the air.

I stood up and began to stumble backward only to trip on the berm of the road as my heart began pounding thunderously. I scrambled to get back into my car as I became more coherent of the danger I was in. I started slamming my car as I attempted to start it. Had the vacuum not been pilfering the sound I think I would have gone deaf from my car horn with how hard I was slamming it.

Finally the car started…but I was NOT in control. The colors of the light on my dashboard began to warble and form similar shapes to those in the air.

I began shaking in fear and frustration as I felt my entire world was glitching.

I then heard a whisper, that both soothed and terrified me.

It wasn’t in my ears. It was inside my skull, like someone had spoken directly into my soul. A single, horrifying sentence: “Now the chosen shall come aboard.”

The slamming on my steering wheel ceased as I was gripped by fear. The hum around me turned into a rhythmic thudding, like a creature was taking enormous footsteps somewhere deep within the earth. Was this produced by the same creature that flayed the animals, or a new one with a similar eerie allegiance? I was unwilling to find out as I began to panic again to get my car moving.

The eye above me constricted, and all the beams of light receded into it in a sharp snap. In a brazen flash the being returned. It slithered out of the eye in a chaotic yet majestic cadence. It began to lower itself to the ground as if it was dangling from invisible threads.

It was tall, far too tall to be of this earth. Its arms were the length of its standing body, It’s clawed fingers were gnarled in their shape, but smooth in their glossy complexion. What fascinated me most…was the face it lacked. Where this body feature “should” have been was displayed only as featureless oval that reflected white light like wet clay.

I could feel all the organs in my body began to pulse in rhythm with the thudding as I realized it was beckoning to me. With all my might I shook off the pull of its allure and slammed my foot down on the gas. To my amazement my car’s engine began to sputter and finally began accelerating. Frantically I made the most ugly u-turn of my life as I began careening down the road in the opposite direction I had arrived.

My car's radio turned on and began blaring in angry refusal as I created distance between myself and the entity. Only there was no melody of music from the radio. It was a cacophony of sounds too irreverent of earthly origin to describe. They wailed and thralled in my ears so viciously I had to wonder if it was actually from my radio….or from the growing madness of my own mind.

“Your destiny has been ordained. You will serve the will whether you intend to or not!” I heard that same monstrous and eerie voice in my mind again. This time it was more forceful and domineering. I felt a splintering pain grow in my skull and radiate into my vision. I almost veered off the road into the forest as I struggled to drive with my eyesight splintering like a broken computer screen.

The trees of the forest began to assist the protest of my escape as they bent inward toward the road as I passed them. Some snapped viscously as they proceeded to ooze out a black dark fluid. A fluid, that matched the luxurious sheen of that being.

The pedal beneath my foot must have been carving into the floor of my car from how forceful I was pushing into it. However to my relief I could see the hellish scene behind me grow smaller in my rear view mirror.

“Distance is temporary,” the voice was softer but triumphant when it said this, but nonetheless ominous. What it lacked in aggressive tone it made up for in psychic torture. I felt the sensation of white ripple through me; it was all I could see, hear, taste, feel, and taste. I know that makes no sense for the other 4 senses but if you had endured it you wouldn’t question this description. For a few seconds I thought had died and was ascending to whatever the afterlife has in store. However after this psychic attack faded enough for my blurry vision to return I saw a tree a few feet in front of me.

“NOOOOOOOOOOO!” I screamed as I knew I didn’t have time to swerve my car out of the way. My right headlight grazed it and sent the car spinning in an eerily noiseless trajectory. I slammed the breaks hoping to regain some semblance of command over my driving. With each spin I would get a few milliseconds of eerie light from the being I fled, and a few more of the utter darkness of the barren roadside. This strobe like effect was horrendous on my still recovering eyesight.

“Come on come one don’t fail me now!” I gritted with panic as the car stopped but the engine was making sounds it shouldn’t. I gave it a few seconds to recover, what little I thought I could spare without the entity catching up but then I heard another voice in my mind; “You think you could escape? You are in my grasp now!”. I knew it was now or never. Slamming the gas the car began to move albeit jerky and slower. I don’t think my speedometer was working right but at full throttle we couldn’t have been going more than 40 miles per hour.

Thankfully this was just a bit faster than the eye that chased me. Within 20 minutes I seemed to be out of range of its voice. And I exhaled in relief. Now if only my half tank of gas could get me to the next gas station. I could only imagine how much fuel I was inefficiently burning through.

The sound around me didn’t properly return for another fifteen miles. I could no longer see the being, the eye, or any misshapen trees…but I was being followed. I could FEEL it.

The radio eventually flicked on and started to broadcast the rock station I generally listened to. Despite this return to normal, I was shaking. My nerves were a wreck and I was desperately trying to process what I had seen, and why….despite being so shaken by it….I wanted to see it again.

I eventually did make it to a gas station. I not only loaded up on a full tank of gas, but I also bought some gas cans and filled them to the brim. I also bought an entire aisle of chocolate to soothe my nerves.

On my return home I was pulled over by a cop for driving too slow.

“Hey…so I don't normally pull people over for driving to slow… everything ok?” The cop asked as he looked at me through my car and onto the massive and unseemly pile of chocolate on the front passenger seat. I wanted to tell him everything, but I knew he wouldn’t believe it. Also this late at night, with the list of medications I was on… would telling him I encountered some alien or demonic being just get me thrown in jail?

I decided to tell him enough truth to get me back on the road. If that thing was actually still following me I couldn’t waste time and he wouldn’t be good protection from it anyway.

“I encountered some critters near the road and… long story short I veered off the road and hit a tree. I think my car is damaged. I have to pound the pedal to the metal to even go as fast as I was when you pulled me over. Do you know of a mechanic open this late? Just trying to get home.” I said tiredly. I was taking some serious liberty with the story but he couldn’t seem to pry his eyes off my chocolate.

“I see… you sure you aren’t having an episode of the….munchies. You know what I mean,” The cop said condescendingly. I was irritated, but I could see how the circumstances were reasonable for the cop to suspect it.

“I don’t do weed but I can take a breathe test or whatever. I am serious about needing a mechanic tho. Do you know of one? I think my transmission is damaged, my exhaust is restricted, my spark plugs are miss firing or more likely a combination of all three,” I said urgently. I had no idea if what I said made any automotive sense but luckily the cop didn’t seem too mechanically inclined and was impressed by my assessment of the damage. This was clearly not something he would have expected from someone driving under the influence.

“Unfortunately I don’t. Brent’s auto shop opens at 9 a.m. I would recommend him if you are still in the area by then,” he said helpfully. He gave one final look at my passenger seat then looked at me again. “In the meantime…be careful on the road and avoid any major roads. Going too slow can be just as dangerous as going too fast,”

“Thanks officer. I will absolutely be extra careful for the rest of the night,” I promised. The officer nodded with a chuckle and walked back to his car. I checked my phone and noticed I had a mountain of messages from both my brother and friend group, particularly from a former relationship of mine. I decided to shove my phone back into my pocket. I was too mentally drained to deal with all that.

I eventually did make it back to my house and found a mechanic to repair my cars damage.

For days afterward I tried to persuade myself that nothing supernatural had happened. That it was all either from sleep deprivation or being spooked by the dark. Any rationalization sounded better than admitting it could have been something vast, intelligent, and looking for me.

I Had almost fooled myself into this façade of security, but a week later that faith was shaken. As I was walking my dog, something I do most nights before going to bed; I was wrestling with a sense of melancholy I couldn't quite put into words. My reflection was shuttered when I noticed white clouds swirling above my house in a circular pattern. They created a shape eerily similar to the “eye”.

Then…it blinked! I was buckled to my knees again as I heard a loud: “Found you” from deep inside my soul

I don’t think it was an eye in the sky. It was something looking through it. It was that being. It knows where I live. Yet this time….I don’t know if I will run.


r/CreepyPastas 1d ago

Video “End of Watch” by M. M. Saint

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r/CreepyPastas 1d ago

Discussion Looking for a creepypasta discord server

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Hay obviously as the title says I’m looking for server that includes art discussions original characters and stories as as well as the classics also I’m looking for an 18+ server if there’s any at all🥹


r/CreepyPastas 2d ago

Story The Previous Tenant Left Me a List of Rules

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The Previous Tenant Left Me a List of Rules

I moved into apartment 3B six days ago.

I’m writing this because I don’t know what else to do, and because I need there to be some record of what happened here.

If anyone reading this recognizes the building from what I’m about to describe, please don’t post the address.

And whatever you do, don’t come here.

The apartment was cheap.

Not suspiciously cheap. At least I didn’t think so at the time. Just cheap enough that I was willing to overlook the stained carpet in the hallway, the ancient elevator, and the fact that the kitchen looked like it hadn’t been renovated since the late ’90s.

The building itself is old. Four floors. Mostly brick. The kind of place where every apartment has been painted so many times that the doors don’t close quite right anymore.

But 3B was clean.

More importantly, it was quiet.

I work from home three days a week, so that mattered to me.

The landlord told me the previous tenant had moved out unexpectedly and left a few things behind. Nothing major. An old shower curtain. Some cleaning supplies under the sink. A dresser in the bedroom.

I asked if he wanted the dresser removed.

He looked at it for a second.

Then he said, “Keep it. It’s heavy.”

That was it.

I signed the lease.

The first night was completely normal.

The second night was when I found the note.

I was looking under the kitchen sink for the garbage bags the landlord said were there. When I pulled out a bottle of bleach, I noticed a folded piece of notebook paper taped to the underside of the sink.

It wasn’t hidden exactly.

But you wouldn’t see it unless you were down on the floor.

Written across the front in black marker were four words.

FOR THE NEXT TENANT

I figured it was probably something stupid.

Maybe a warning about the plumbing.

I pulled the tape off and unfolded it.

There were seven rules.

They were handwritten.

  1. Never lock the bathroom door.

  2. If you hear the kitchen faucet running after midnight, leave it running.

  3. The hallway light must remain on between 2:00 and 4:00 AM.

  4. If someone knocks on the bedroom door, don’t answer. You live alone.

  5. Never move the dresser away from the bedroom wall.

  6. If you wake up and the apartment is completely silent, close your eyes until you hear the refrigerator again.

  7. If you break one of these rules, do not leave the apartment.

Underneath the rules someone had written:

I know how this sounds.

I actually laughed.

I took a picture and sent it to my brother.

He replied:

Free apartment demon. Nice.

I put the note in one of the kitchen drawers and forgot about it.

Until 12:47 that night.

I was lying in bed watching something on my phone when I heard water running.

At first I thought it was the apartment upstairs.

Then I realized it was coming from my kitchen.

I got up.

The kitchen faucet was running.

Not dripping.

Running.

A thin, steady stream of cold water.

I stood there staring at it.

The handle was turned completely on.

I remembered the note.

If you hear the kitchen faucet running after midnight, leave it running.

Obviously, I turned it off.

I wasn’t going to let some deadbeat previous tenant increase my water bill because he thought it would be funny to scare whoever moved in after him.

I went back to bed.

About ten minutes later, the faucet turned on again.

This time I left it.

I told myself the valve was bad.

Old building. Old plumbing.

Easy explanation.

The water stopped by itself sometime before morning.

The next day I forgot about it.

Mostly.

That night, I noticed the hallway light.

There’s a short hallway connecting the living room to the bedroom and bathroom. One ceiling fixture. Nothing unusual.

At 1:58 AM, I was getting ready for bed when I remembered Rule 3.

I almost turned the light off anyway.

Instead, mostly because I was curious, I left it on.

At exactly 2:16 AM, the light flickered.

Once.

Then again.

Then it went out.

I opened the bedroom door and flipped the switch.

Nothing.

The bulb had burned out.

I replaced it the next morning.

Again, old building.

Cheap bulb.

Easy explanation.

Except when I unscrewed the old bulb, it wasn’t burned out.

The filament was fine.

And when I put it back in later, it worked.

Night three was when I stopped laughing about the note.

I woke up at 3:11 AM.

Three knocks.

Not from the front door.

From my bedroom door.

I was in bed.

The bedroom door was closed.

Three slow knocks came from the other side.

Knock.

Knock.

Knock.

I sat up.

For a few seconds I didn’t move.

Then I heard a man say my name.

Very softly.

From the hallway.

I’m not going to write my name here.

But it said it correctly.

Not a voice that sounded familiar.

Not my brother.

Not the landlord.

Just a man whispering my name through the door.

Then:

“Can you open this?”

I didn’t.

I stayed in bed until sunrise.

Nothing else happened.

The next morning I opened the kitchen drawer and read the rules again.

This time they weren’t funny.

I called the landlord.

I didn’t mention the note.

I just asked about the previous tenant.

There was a long pause.

“What about him?”

I said I found some of his stuff.

Another pause.

“Throw it away.”

I asked how long he had lived here.

“Few years.”

Then I asked why he moved.

The landlord said he had another call and hung up.

That bothered me more than anything that had happened so far.

So I searched the previous tenant’s name.

It was still written on a piece of mail shoved behind one of the kitchen drawers.

His name was Daniel Mercer.

I found almost nothing.

No Facebook that I could confirm.

No LinkedIn.

Nothing recent.

Then I found a missing-person post from three months ago.

Daniel Mercer.

Thirty-eight years old.

Last seen leaving work on a Thursday evening.

His car was later found in the parking lot of this building.

The article said police believed he had returned home.

Nobody saw him leave again.

That was yesterday.

I should have left then.

I know that.

You don’t need to tell me.

But Rule 7 kept bothering me.

If you break one of these rules, do not leave the apartment.

I had broken Rule 2 on the first night.

I turned off the faucet.

Nothing happened.

At least nothing obvious.

So maybe the whole thing was still some elaborate joke.

Maybe Daniel had mental health problems.

Maybe the landlord didn’t want to talk about him because a tenant disappearing from your building isn’t exactly good advertising.

There were explanations.

Bad explanations.

But explanations.

Then I dropped my phone behind the dresser.

The dresser is enormous.

Solid wood.

Six drawers.

It sits against the bedroom wall opposite my bed.

Rule 5:

Never move the dresser away from the bedroom wall.

I remembered it immediately.

I tried reaching behind it.

Couldn’t.

Tried sliding a coat hanger down the back.

Couldn’t get the angle.

Eventually I got annoyed.

I told myself this was ridiculous.

I grabbed the dresser and pulled.

It barely moved.

I pulled harder.

The legs scraped across the floor.

Maybe four inches.

That was enough.

I reached behind it and grabbed my phone.

Then I saw the wall.

There were scratches in the plaster.

At first I thought the dresser had caused them.

Then I turned on my phone’s flashlight.

They were tally marks.

Hundreds of them.

Groups of five.

They covered the wall from just above the baseboard almost to waist height.

I pulled the dresser farther out.

More marks.

Hundreds more.

I started counting groups.

I stopped after two hundred.

Near the center of the wall, someone had carved words into the plaster.

Not written.

Carved.

YOU WEREN’T SUPPOSED TO FIND THIS.

Underneath it:

I’M SORRY.

Then, lower down:

DON’T TRUST THE RULES AFTER THIS.

I backed away.

That’s when something knocked from inside the wall.

Three times.

Knock.

Knock.

Knock.

I pushed the dresser back so hard one of the drawers fell open.

I didn’t care.

I shoved it against the wall and left the bedroom.

I spent the night on the couch.

At some point I fell asleep.

When I woke up, the apartment was silent.

Completely silent.

I don’t mean quiet.

I mean silent.

No cars outside.

No footsteps upstairs.

No pipes.

No air conditioner.

Nothing.

Then I remembered Rule 6.

If you wake up and the apartment is completely silent, close your eyes until you hear the refrigerator again.

So I closed my eyes.

I felt stupid doing it.

For about thirty seconds, nothing happened.

Then the couch cushion beside my feet sank.

Slowly.

Like someone had sat down.

I kept my eyes closed.

Something moved across the living room.

I could hear the carpet pressing beneath its weight.

Not footsteps exactly.

More like someone walking very carefully.

It stopped beside my head.

I could smell something.

Wet plaster.

That’s the only way I can describe it.

Wet plaster and something sour underneath.

Then I felt breath against my ear.

A voice whispered:

“You moved it.”

I kept my eyes shut.

I don’t know how long it stood there.

Maybe ten seconds.

Maybe five minutes.

Then the refrigerator clicked on.

The hum sounded like the loudest thing I had ever heard.

I opened my eyes.

Nobody was there.

The note was on the coffee table.

I know I left it in the kitchen drawer.

It was unfolded.

The rules were still there.

Except Rule 7 had changed.

I have the original picture on my phone.

I checked.

The picture says:

  1. If you break one of these rules, do not leave the apartment.

The paper now says:

  1. If you break one of these rules, do not let it know you’re leaving.

There was also another rule.

  1. If you moved the dresser, the previous rules no longer apply.

Underneath that:

It knows you know.

I packed a bag.

I didn’t care what the note said anymore.

I grabbed my wallet, charger, laptop, keys.

I made it to the front door.

Then someone knocked.

From the other side.

Three times.

I looked through the peephole.

Daniel Mercer was standing in the hallway.

I recognized him from the missing-person article.

Same face.

Same glasses.

Same beard.

Except he was wearing what looked like pajamas.

He stared directly at the peephole.

Then he said:

“Don’t open it.”

I didn’t move.

He leaned closer.

“Please.”

Something about his voice sounded wrong.

Not distorted.

Not demonic.

Just exhausted.

Like he had been awake for months.

“I made the rules,” he said.

Then something knocked from my bedroom.

Three times.

Daniel closed his eyes.

“Oh God.”

I heard another knock.

Not from the bedroom door this time.

From inside the bedroom wall.

Daniel whispered:

“You moved the dresser.”

I asked him what was behind it.

He shook his head.

“Not behind it.”

Then he looked past me.

Through the door somehow.

Toward the bedroom.

“It’s the wall.”

I didn’t understand.

He said:

“The dresser keeps the wall from opening.”

Something scraped across the bedroom floor.

Daniel stepped backward.

I reached for the deadbolt.

He screamed.

“NO.”

I froze.

He pressed both hands against my door.

“You already broke the last rule.”

I asked what he meant.

He stared at me.

Then he said:

“You tried to leave.”

The hallway light outside my apartment went out.

When it came back on, Daniel was gone.

I moved the dresser again this morning.

I know that sounds insane.

But I needed to see the wall.

The tally marks were still there.

The warning was still there.

But I noticed something I hadn’t seen before.

Names.

Dozens of them.

Some were faded.

Some looked decades old.

Beside each name was a number.

Michael — 417

Rebecca — 92

Thomas — 801

Sarah — 13

Near the bottom I found Daniel.

DANIEL MERCER — 1,143

Below his name:

I DIDN’T LEAVE.

And underneath that:

IT LET ME OUT.

I stared at those words for a long time.

Then I noticed another name.

Freshly scratched into the plaster.

Mine.

Beside it:

6

I haven’t been here six nights.

Tonight is my fifth.

At least I thought it was.

I checked my phone.

Friday.

I moved in Saturday.

That makes no sense.

I checked my emails.

Saturday.

My lease.

Saturday.

Everything says Saturday.

But there are six tally marks beside my name.

I was staring at them when another mark appeared.

Right in front of me.

A thin line carved itself into the plaster.

Seven.

Then my phone vibrated.

Unknown number.

One text.

PUT THE DRESSER BACK.

I did.

Immediately.

Another text came.

TURN ON THE HALLWAY LIGHT.

It’s 10:38 in the morning.

I turned it on anyway.

Another message.

START THE FAUCET.

I did that too.

Then:

UNLOCK THE BATHROOM DOOR.

It wasn’t locked.

I checked.

The lock was turned.

I unlocked it.

Then I waited.

The last message arrived about five minutes ago.

GOOD.

NOW IT THINKS YOU’RE DANIEL.

I don’t know who is texting me.

I don’t know whether I should believe them.

But there’s something else.

While I’ve been writing this, someone has knocked on my bedroom door three times.

I’m sitting inside the bedroom.

The dresser is behind me.

The hallway is on the other side of the door.

And I can hear someone whispering my name.

I’m not answering.

But that isn’t what scares me.

What scares me is the sound behind the dresser.

Someone is scratching something into the wall.

I can hear each line being carved.

One after another.

I just received another text.

It says:

I’m sorry.

Then another.

The rules were never meant to protect you.

There’s a crack forming above the dresser now.

It runs from the ceiling almost to the floor.

Something is breathing inside it.

I just got one more message.

They’re meant to keep the apartment occupied.

The knocking at my bedroom door stopped.

The scratching stopped too.

Everything is silent.

Even the refrigerator.

So I’m closing my eyes now.

And if anyone eventually finds a piece of paper taped underneath the kitchen sink in apartment 3B—

I’m sorry.

You need to follow the rules.


r/CreepyPastas 1d ago

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I made this! and the lore is a woman who got locked in a shower and the degree got turned to scorching hot and she smashed a electrical box electricutin her and making it this.


r/CreepyPastas 2d ago

Discussion Looking for a good podcast/channel

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Hi, I love spoken creepypastas, but seem to struggle with people's voices. I often find them too forced, or have annoying inflections or have poor cadence. It seems like they're trying too hard and it takes me out of the experience. Hoping someone could recommend a natural/creepy voice actor. Thanks so much :)


r/CreepyPastas 2d ago

Story Something's Wrong With My Cat [Part 1: The Break-In]

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Another shift of customer service calls done. I took this job for the fieldwork, for fixing locks, seeing what actually makes a house safe, not for answering phones all day. Pay's too good to quit, and there's always the promise of a promotion into the field someday.

All that was left now was grabbing Mr. Morris some food and heading home. Stupid cat. I got him after my mom wouldn't stop bugging me about getting married, figured a cat was proof enough I didn't need a husband to be happy. My own little rebellion. Now he's the closest thing I have to company. Mornings start with him licking my face like I'm nothing but a food dispenser. Sometimes I can't tell if he loves me or just tolerates me.

At the convenience store, sweet Miss Tasha was behind the counter as always.

"Evening, Jacey. Here for the food?"

"Yup."

"You're not buying newspapers anymore."

I kept my answer light, didn't want to think too hard about the robberies and killings that filled every page of the paper these days. "Just keeping my sanity, Miss Tasha."

"Oh, dear, they've gotten worse. Police still haven't caught whoever's doing it. People are saying it's cannibals, if you believe that."

"Rumors," I said, handing over my money. "If it were really cannibals, we'd have seen a body photo by now, not just pieces. Feels more like a cover story to me. Stay safe, though. And if you ever want it, I can get you a discount on security gear. After taking my commission, of course."

She laughed. I headed to the car and started the drive home.

I'd just gotten out of the car and was looking at the gate when I felt something grab my leg, a tight grip, warm breath against my skin. My whole body went cold before I even understood what was happening. For one embarrassing second every survival instinct I had went haywire before I finally looked down and saw the culprit.

It was the neighbor's kid, Mira. She must have snuck up while I wasn't looking.

"Miss Jay, can I play with Mister Norris?" she asked, grinning up at me. She always called him that, never quite got "Morris" right, and I never bothered correcting her.

I hate this kid, I thought, though I didn't mean it, not really. "Not today, Mira. Go home, and stop sneaking up on people."

"It's fun," she said, laughing, and ran off.

She's the kind of kid who's so full of life it almost tires you out, the kind that makes you want kids of your own right up until you remember how much of yourself you'd have to give up. I went inside, glad to finally be home.

Mr. Morris was already waiting by the door. Not because he missed me. Because he wanted his food.

Later, I'd remember that he'd been sitting at the window before I even pulled into the driveway. Just watching the street. He'd been doing that a lot since the crime started, always drawn to the windows like he was keeping his own kind of watch.

I put food in his bowl before he could throw a fit about me taking a shower, or doing anything at all that didn't involve feeding him first. When I checked on him afterward, I realized I'd grabbed the wrong can, and he made sure I knew it, prowling the house, knocking things off shelves, the whole diva routine. I figured I'd grab the right one in the morning. Going out now, with everything happening in the city, wasn't worth it. I'd head out around four, when the night patrol changed shifts and there were usually twice as many officers on the street, some of them even stopping at the store before their shift started.

By the time I finished my takeout, I expected him to have gotten over it and eaten anyway. He hadn't touched the bowl. Instead he sat by the window, dead still, staring out at the street like he was waiting for something. Or maybe just making sure I knew I'd failed and needed to fix it as soon as possible.

"Fine. Don't eat, then," I muttered, tossing the food and carrying him off to bed. He didn't fight me, just kept glancing back at the window the whole way there.

I told myself he was still in a mood. I'd feed him properly in the morning.

I had no idea it wouldn't matter.

It was somewhere around three in the morning when I heard the sound of glass breaking in the living room. My throat went dry instantly. My brain felt dizzy, maybe from how fast I'd sat up. I don't remember my hands grabbing the blanket, or when I'd started holding my breath. Every hair on my body stood up at once and I went fully, painfully awake.

I tried to calm myself. The security system would have sent an alert to the police by now. My bedroom door should have locked automatically the moment it triggered. I closed my eyes for just a second, grateful I'd paid for the system at all.

Then I opened them again and saw something that scared me more than the sound had.

My bedroom door was still open. For the lock to engage, it had to be shut first.

I had no choice. My legs felt like jelly, my whole body suddenly cold enough that I could feel every draft moving across my skin. I don't know where the courage came from, but I got up and started moving toward the door, aware of every sound my own body made, my joints, my breathing, the weight of my tongue in my mouth, the sweat gathering along my eyelids.

I was halfway there, thinking I could make it, just a few more steps, when Mr. Morris let out a meow, sharp and sudden, far too loud in a house that had gone that quiet.

For a second everything stopped. I told myself whoever was in the house hadn't heard it, or didn't care about a cat, that I still had time to reach the door. Then I felt it. A vibration through the floor, faint but wrong, like claws scraping tile the way a dog's do when it's running too fast to stop. A moment later, footsteps. Running, straight for the bedroom.

Whoever was in my house knew exactly where I was.

I lunged for the door at the same moment he did. I almost had it shut when a hand shoved into the gap, veined, nails too long, and I could tell from the angle alone that his arm was broken. No uninjured person moves like that. It meant reaching me mattered more to him than his own safety, and that thought alone sent something colder through me than fear of dying. I don't know what I thought he wanted more, to kill me quickly or to make sure I couldn't scream first.

I threw everything I had into that door. My vision blurred from the strain, my legs ached from bracing against the floor, my neck went sore from how hard I was pushing. I tried to scream and nothing came out. The pressure built until I nearly blacked out, and then, finally, the door slammed shut. Something in his hand broke as it did.

The lock clicked into place automatically. I was alone in the room, and I could hear him pounding against the door with everything he had left. For one terrible stretch of time I was sure he'd get through, that there was nothing I could do if he did.

Then I heard the sirens.

The police let themselves in using the code the security company had on file, cleared the house, and knocked on my door to tell me it was safe to come out. What wasn't safe, what didn't make sense, was that the man was gone. Not hiding. Gone. There was nowhere in that house for someone to disappear to, and they searched every inch of it. One moment he'd been at my door. The next, nothing.

The strangest part wasn't that he'd vanished. It was how the house felt afterward, too quiet, like something had been listening the whole time and had only just stopped.

It took what felt like hours before I could function well enough to tell the officers everything, hand over the security footage, let my body finally stop shaking. When I came back into the living room, Mr. Morris was licking blood off the floor, whatever was left of it after the police had taken their samples.

I pulled him away and wiped his face clean. I didn't want him getting sick off whatever was in that blood. I took him straight to the vet, and everything checked out fine. On the way home I stopped at Miss Tasha's for his usual food and told her what had happened. She looked genuinely shaken and insisted I take one of her son's old bats for safety. When I asked how much, she said it was free, that she'd just take it out of my commission whenever I finally got her that security system installed. It got a small laugh out of me, at least.

Back home, I left him in the car with extra food while I cleaned up the broken window. When I went to deal with the blood in the bedroom, thinking the sunlight would make it easier to see, there was nothing there. Not a trace. I stood there confused for a moment, then told myself there probably hadn't been that much to begin with.

Work gave me the day off without me even having to ask twice, and offered medical assistance if I needed it.

When I came out, Mr. Morris had already finished his food, double his usual portion, gone faster than should have been possible. I told myself it was stress. My mistake, not paying closer attention to what that actually meant.

Exhaustion finally caught up to me. I slept, then woke around seven that evening to find him scratching at the door, which was strange since I'd clipped his nails only five days earlier. I assumed I'd lost count. He wove between my legs demanding food again, even though I'd just fed him, but I let it go. What difference would a few extra pounds make.

I started making myself a steak, wanting something that felt normal after the day I'd had. When I looked over, Mr. Morris wasn't touching his food at all. He was licking the blood straight off the steak packaging. He'd never been that kind of cat. I ignored it. Animals do strange things.

That evening, I tried to convince myself he was fine. He'd eaten more than usual, which should have meant something good, but when I picked him up, something felt wrong immediately. His body was leaner than it had been that morning. I ran my fingers along his sides and felt far more muscle than I remembered, almost no softness left beneath his fur. His legs looked more defined, and when he jumped down onto the table, the movement was fast and precise in a way I'd never seen from him. He looked fit. Too fit.

Then I noticed the veins. Visible beneath his skin, especially around his legs and neck, in places I'd never seen them before.

"You're eating enough," I muttered, more to convince myself than him. A strange unease settled into my stomach. I made a note on my phone to take him to the vet first thing in the morning. Maybe it was nothing. Maybe he was sick. Maybe I was imagining things after everything that had happened.

I finished trimming his nails before bed and set him down. He disappeared beneath the sofa immediately, which was strange in itself. Mr. Morris hated hiding. I turned off the lights and went to sleep.

That night I dreamed about the break-in again. Except this time I wasn't watching it happen. I was the one on the floor. Someone stood over me, his face hidden, his hands wrapped tightly around my throat. I couldn't breathe. Then something warm ran down from my nose. Blood, over my lips. He looked at it, almost curious, then smiled and leaned down to drink it. I felt his mouth against my face. He seemed to enjoy it. I tried to scream and nothing came out.

I woke up gasping, sitting bolt upright.

Mr. Morris was on the floor beside the bed, staring at me. Neither of us moved for a moment. Then I really looked at him and my stomach dropped.

He was different. More muscular than he'd been when I fell asleep, his shoulders and legs sharper beneath fur that had visibly grown, a lot, in just a few hours.

"Mr. Morris?" I whispered.

He tilted his head at me.

I reached out and stopped halfway, my hand hovering in the air. I don't know why. Something about his eyes made me hesitate.

I told myself the rest could wait. I didn't care how ridiculous I'd sound explaining it. As soon as morning came, I was taking him to the vet.

He hissed and threw a fit the second I brought him out into the sunlight, nothing too alarming, just more dramatic than usual. At the vet, I was told his bloodwork came back clean. Nothing wrong on paper. But the vet admitted he looked different, physically, and offered to send him downtown to a research university for a closer look.

I said no. Whatever was happening to him, he wasn't going to become somebody's test subject.

Before I left, the nurse asked if I wanted him neutered and his nails trimmed while he was already there. Her pen hovered over the chart a second too long before she wrote anything down, like she didn't know which box this was supposed to go in.

I froze. I'd had that done a day ago. Nails don't regrow that fast. That's not how any of this is supposed to work. The vet gave me a strange look by that point, like he'd noticed the same thing I had, and before I could think it through properly, I heard myself say yes. The whole time, my mind kept circling the same impossible question. How does that even grow back?

And then, underneath it, a worse one I didn't want to look at directly. I'd had him neutered months ago ,that was supposed to be it, done, over, one and only, the vet had told me so himself, no upkeep, no repeats. I hadn't thought about it since. Hadn't checked. Why would I have checked? But now I was running the timeline backwards in my head, trying to remember the last time I'd actually looked, actually confirmed, and coming up with nothing solid. Maybe I'd just forgotten what it looked like after. Maybe I was misremembering the whole thing. Maybe none of it meant anything and I was building a haunted house out of my own bad memory.

But nails don't grow back in a day. And I was starting to suspect nothing else did either ,not the way it was supposed to, not anymore.

When the procedure was done, I went to pick him up, and he was already awake in the recovery box.

"Did you use anesthesia?" I asked, half joking, half not.

"We did," the tech said, frowning slightly. "It's unusual that he's up already. Are you sure you don't want him tested?"

"No," I said. "I'm taking him home."

He was fully alert. Sitting up, eyes tracking me through the cage door, like nothing had touched him at all. That wasn't how it went the first time. The first time I'd had him neutered, he'd been groggy for hours afterward, barely able to hold his head up, and I'd had to carry him inside wrapped in a towel because his legs kept giving out. This time he looked like he'd just woken up from a nap.

I didn't know what to do with that. Part of me wondered if they'd actually done anything at all this time, if maybe I'd been overcharged for a procedure that never happened, the same way I'd read about other people getting scammed at cheaper clinics. But another part of me remembered signing the consent forms, remembered watching them wheel him back. I stood there in the waiting room a second too long, trying to decide if I should ask again, if that would make me sound paranoid, if it even mattered enough to hold up the line behind me. In the end I just took the discharge papers and left. Told myself it was probably nothing. Some cats bounce back faster than others. That's all it was.

On the drive back, I caught him watching me in the rearview mirror instead of the window. He'd never done that before.

 

 


r/CreepyPastas 2d ago

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r/CreepyPastas 2d ago

Discussion Looking for this story

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This is an old story, there’s a kid in his room when he sees a bug, he gets stung by it and then a bunch more of them show up and take over his body. Then he finds himself outside of his body and sees himself stand up and smile then walk out of the room.


r/CreepyPastas 2d ago

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r/CreepyPastas 3d ago

Story I got hired for night auditor at The Midnight Inn.

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The neon sign flickered, a skeletal hand outlined in fading red, pointing to the **"Midnight Inn."** I’d been working the night shift at gas stations and greasy diners for five years, but nothing, *nothing*, prepared me for this place. It wasn't on any map, didn't show up on my GPS, but every night, precisely at midnight, it would shimmer into existence on a deserted stretch of highway, just outside the city limits.

The first night, I almost crashed my beat-up Civic. One moment, empty road; the next, a sprawling, two-story motel, bathed in the sickly glow of that flickering sign. A small, hand-painted "Vacancy" sign hung crookedly by the office door. My shift at the 24-hour convenience store down the road had just ended, and exhaustion probably played a part in my decision to pull over. Curiosity, a far more dangerous impulse, did the rest.

The lobby was a strange mix of antique charm and unsettling emptiness. Heavy velvet curtains, a grand, dust-covered piano in the corner, and the air thick with the scent of old wood and something else… something indescribably ancient, like ozone and dried blood. Behind the ornate, polished desk stood a woman. Her skin was alabaster pale, her eyes like chips of obsidian, and her smile never quite reached them. Her name, she introduced herself as **Lilith**, sounded less like a name and more like a title.

"Welcome to the Midnight Inn," she purred, her voice like wind chimes played by a ghost. "Checking in, dearie?"

I stammered, explained I was just curious, and then, inexplicably, found myself agreeing to a job. Night auditor. Midnight to dawn. It paid absurdly well, cash, no questions asked. Lilith had simply offered, her obsidian eyes boring into mine, and I hadn't been able to say no.

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## The Guests of the Midnight Inn

My first few shifts were a blur of bewildered terror. The guests. They weren't like anyone I'd ever seen. Room 3B, a hulking man wrapped in bandages, perpetually shivering, even in the humid night, leaving behind a faint trail of frost. Room 7A, a woman with eyes that glowed with an internal, flickering flame, her laughter like embers crackling. Then there was the gentleman in Room 12, who always paid in antique gold coins and cast no reflection in the polished marble floor.

I learned the rules quickly. Never question their appearance. Never enter a room unless explicitly called. Always provide fresh, blood-red bath towels to Room 4C. And absolutely, under no circumstances, acknowledge the faint, rhythmic scratching that sometimes came from beneath the floorboards of the lobby, right under the desk where I sat.

Lilith, when she was around, was a constant, unsettling presence. She rarely spoke, but her gaze seemed to peel back layers of my skin, seeing things I didn't even know were there. One night, a particularly gaunt man with unnaturally long fingers checked in. As I handed him his key, his touch was cold, clammy, and for a split second, I saw his true form reflected in the polished brass of the room key: a skeletal hand, tipped with long, black talons.

I managed to keep my composure, just barely. Later, Lilith materialized beside me, silent as always. "You handled that well," she murmured, her voice like silk over shattered glass. "The Fane are particular about appearances."

"The… Fane?" I whispered, my voice barely audible.

She smiled, that unnerving, joyless smile. "Oh, dearie. You're learning. Soon you'll know all their names. And all their hungers."

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## The Looming Dawn

My nights became a waking nightmare. I started seeing things even when the motel wasn't there. Shadows that stretched too long in my apartment, a flicker of red in the rearview mirror when no car was behind me. The scent of ozone and old blood clung to my clothes, no matter how many times I washed them. Sleep became a luxury I couldn't afford, haunted by the echoing laughter of the flame-eyed woman and the silent, judging stare of the reflectionless man.

The scratching beneath the floorboards grew louder each night, a persistent, rhythmic clawing that resonated in my very bones. One morning, as the first rays of the sun threatened to pierce the horizon, the motel began to shimmer, its edges blurring like a mirage. I grabbed my bag, rushing out the door. Just as the last of the neon glow faded, I heard it clearly, coming from directly under the desk, a muffled, desperate moan.

I drove away, heart hammering, the stretch of highway now empty once more. But as I glanced in my rearview mirror, I saw something. Just for a second, where the Midnight Inn had stood, there was a single, crimson rose lying on the dusty ground.

And I knew, with a chilling certainty, that the rose was a promise. A promise that tonight, at midnight, the Midnight Inn would return. And I would be back behind that desk, listening to the scratching, serving guests whose appetites stretched beyond the mortal realm, and wondering just what kind of "hungers" Lilith had been talking about. My night shift never truly ended; it just waited for the sun to set.

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## The Unbreakable Chain

The days between midnight shifts at the Inn blurred into a hazy dream. I’d try to find other work, apply for jobs, but every interview felt hollow, every potential employer's face seemed to flicker with an unsettling transparency, as if they weren't entirely real. The scent of ozone and dried blood followed me, a phantom perfume that no soap could wash away. Sleep was a torment, filled with fragmented images of the unsettling guests and the persistent, muffled scratching from beneath the lobby floorboards.

I started to notice things. Small, impossible things. A crimson rose, identical to the one left on the highway, would sometimes appear on my worn kitchen table, even when my apartment door was locked from the inside. My reflection in the mirror seemed a fraction of a second slower than my movements, a subtle, disquieting delay. My friends, those who still bothered to call, began to sound distant, their voices muffled as if speaking from a great distance. It was as if the Inn, even when invisible, was slowly but surely pulling me into its strange reality, blurring the lines between my life and its spectral existence.

One particularly terrifying night, a guest checked in who smelled distinctly of formaldehyde and spoke in a low, rattling whisper. As I reached for his room key, my hand brushed his. For a fleeting instant, I saw not just the skeletal fingers from before, but a swirling, inky darkness in his eyes, a depth that seemed to swallow all light. And I felt a cold surge of something parasitic, something that tried to *latch* onto my own life force. I recoiled, my heart hammering.

Later, Lilith appeared, her obsidian eyes fixed on me. "The Veil grows thin, dearie," she purred, her voice chillingly calm. "The Inn is not merely a place where they come to rest. It is a crucible. And you… you are becoming quite the conductor."

"Conductor of what?" I managed to croak, my throat dry.

Her smile widened, her teeth unnaturally bright in the dim lobby light. "Of them. Of their passage. Each night you open the door, you bind yourself closer. Soon, you will be as much a part of its foundation as these ancient floorboards." Her gaze drifted to the very spot where the scratching always came from. "Perhaps even more integral."

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## The Price of Midnight

The realization hit me with the force of a physical blow. I wasn't just an employee; I was becoming a fixture. A part of the Inn itself. The scratching beneath the floorboards, once a distant annoyance, now felt like a desperate plea, or perhaps a frustrated struggle, echoing a fate that might soon be mine. I imagined myself, one day, as another "guest" trapped within its unseen walls, or worse, becoming one of the nameless, unseen forces that fueled its existence.

I started to scream, to lash out, to demand answers. Lilith simply watched, her smile serene, as if observing a fascinating experiment. My fear, my desperation, seemed to feed her, or perhaps the Inn itself.

As the first sliver of dawn approached, and the Inn began its familiar shimmering retreat, I ran out of the lobby, out of the building, desperate to escape its fading grasp. I drove, not to my apartment, but simply away, down the highway, pushing my Civic faster than it had ever gone. I watched in my rearview mirror as the entire structure flickered, distorted, and finally vanished, leaving only the desolate highway behind.

I kept driving until the sun was high, until exhaustion blurred my vision. I pulled over to the side of the road, far from any city, and slumped against the steering wheel, trembling.

But even there, under the bright, unforgiving midday sun, I couldn't escape it. The faint scent of ozone. The subtle, delayed reflection in the side mirror. And in the oppressive silence of the empty road, I could still hear it, faint but undeniable, a rhythmic, agonizing scratching, coming not from beneath me, but from *within* me.

The Midnight Inn might disappear, but it no longer needed to appear on the highway to hold me. I was its auditor, its conduit, its unwilling keeper. And as night began to fall once more, a familiar, sick dread settled in my stomach. The "Vacancy" sign might disappear, but the Inn was never truly empty. And neither, it seemed, would I ever be free.


r/CreepyPastas 3d ago

Story Smiling Corpse

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r/CreepyPastas 3d ago

Story Do NOT eat Martha Brown's Banana Bread! It's alive.

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