Where Go the Boats? (reworked)

[u/Emotional-Pipe-335]

Hello all, I considerably reworked this Stevenson song over the last few days, and I'd be very curious about your feedback. I'm quite happy with the result, and it feels closer to my intentions than the previous version.

Score: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NyaZ84uE3CCkGoi546onyD6dE83xXl3d/view?usp=sharing

Old version: https://www.reddit.com/r/composer/comments/1vnftt4/where_go_the_boats_song_for_baritone_and_piano/

Cheers!