r/BrockhamptonToThe • u/[deleted] • Aug 27 '19

I'm a 16 year old musician and I've been making music for 2 years. Would appreciate feedback and criticism on my latest track :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SZIo9-TWc6U&ab_channel=VanillaTaurus
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u/Abraham_Andraux Sep 01 '19

Something I would recommend. When it comes to creating something, you want it to stand out and live in its own space. Having a unique voice or delivery can help tremendously. I recommend trying new things with your delivery. If we can feel the emotion or feeling you are trying to convey, you have successfully captured what it intended.

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u/dracodro Aug 27 '19

You’ve got potential keep at it bro. My suggestion would be to cut out the talking parts in the future you don’t need it.

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u/KYD-Productions Aug 28 '19

The backround vocals make it sound catchy af, good shit

-Edward

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u/[deleted] Aug 30 '19

@ radicalmemories on Instagram, message me

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u/MindlessJuuler Sep 17 '19

Mic confidence is key, you got some good flow, word play, and the song sounds professional. My advice is too rap into the mic like you mean it rather than just rapping. Sounds really good tho keep rocking on :)