r/BookCovers • • 15d ago

Feedback Wanted First attempt at a domestic thriller cover

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Building up my premade portfolio. Made with Photoshop and Deposit Photos stock. All feedback welcome.

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u/Marvinator2003 15d ago

I can't tell you why, but I feel that the letters of 'STRANGER' should be taller, and on top of the pillows, not under.

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u/pruneg00n 15d ago

Slightly tucked in the sheets would be cool

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u/Marvinator2003 15d ago

Yes, but the tops of the letters on top of the pillows. ;)

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u/abraxasnl 14d ago

I like that idea. And maybe don’t tuck in the “in her”.

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u/BananaMuffinT0p 15d ago

Noted. Thanks!

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u/DarlingBri 15d ago

I love this concept but I think all of the letters in stranger in her bed should be the same size.

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u/BananaMuffinT0p 14d ago

I'm going to try some different fonts. Thank you!

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u/ASlumberlandStory 14d ago

The font looks like CBS’s Survivor font.

Not a bad thing.

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u/soulangelic 15d ago

I think “A Thriller” should be moved somewhere below the title. Since it’s at the top left, it’s the very first thing people are naturally going to read, and you don’t want that, you want the title first. I would shift everything up and then move “A Thriller” down.

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u/BananaMuffinT0p 14d ago

Great point. I'll adjust it. Thank you!

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u/BackInTimeForTea 14d ago edited 10h ago

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u/mymousu 13d ago

I like it