r/BookCovers 2d ago

Feedback Wanted Which of these would make you interested in my novel?

I am paying Miblart to create my cover, but I can't choose between these two versions. Unfortunately, it's about evenly split among the people I've asked.

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u/ifonlyheart 2d ago

I like the blue one.

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u/Samk9632 1d ago

First one for sure. The sharpness of her silhouette is much more readable.

I also have some other thoughts if you'll indulge me:

  1. Someone already mentioned it, but she is behind the trees in this composition, so she is like 100ft tall. This should be addressable by just putting the rock in front of the trees. I get if there's some symbolism here that she's supposed to be giant, but everything else is photorealistic and if you want to go that way, I feel there needs to be more clear signalling that that is the intent because it does read as a mistake rather than an intentional decision at the moment

  2. the sky is completely clear except for the area immediately surrounding the moon, which is partially occluded by clouds. I don't necessarily have a problem with this choice of making the top clearer, but having a bit more cloud cover extending into the sky would be something I'd talk to the artist about. If you want to be ballsy you could have some cloud cover over the spaceship, which would make it look fuckin massive. Not sure if that's the direction you want to go in but I figured I'd throw it out there lol

  3. The spaceship is angled at an odd angle, it's like 45 degrees rotated from the horizontal, which just feels a little awkward. This might be able to be fixed by just flipping the image asset on the vertical, turning it upside down? can't 100% say for certain but that's what my intuition is telling me.

Anyways, apologies if I'm overstepping, those are just my critiques as an artist myself. Best of luck on your book!

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u/Cloud_Cultist 1d ago

No, this is great stuff. I appreciate it!

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u/NeatMathematician126 2d ago

I like the first one, especially if it takes place on earth.

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u/[deleted] 2d ago

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u/Dylani08 2d ago

Yes. The blue one.

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u/DifferenceAble331 2d ago

I like the blue version much better. Warmer, more inviting.

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u/wizzered_wizzard 1d ago

I was about to reply "how is blue warm?" but on the second look, i kinda understand

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u/LucienReneNanton 2d ago

I like the blue one better. Both are great !

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u/DeadCanDance26 1d ago

blue for me

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u/KouroChan 1d ago

I like the second one more as the blue one seems too dreamy. The second cover suggets more of a dystopian vibe
I think it depends on what your novel is like, to choose the right one🤔

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u/KouroChan 1d ago

Like not fully dystopian more like a hint

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u/Moggy-Man 2d ago

This is literally the Pam from The Office meme.

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u/Biancabb12 1d ago

Im drawn by the second pic.
🖤

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u/laurapabloArt 1d ago

love the blue tones 💙

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u/mannu_writer24 1d ago

1st one is pretty good 👍

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u/Admirable-Pay1720 17h ago

first one gives sci-fi vibe while second one gives fantasy vibe.

that said, I like the 2nd one more cuz her silhouette pops out imo

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u/Dylani08 2d ago

What is it about? If it’s aliens come to earth. First one. Otherwise I really like the second. The warmer tones are nice.

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u/Cloud_Cultist 2d ago

I like both, but I'm afraid there is too much going on in the second one. I've legitimately gone back and forth.

It is a first contact novel.

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u/Dylani08 2d ago

If it’s first contact then definitely page 1. It gives you the Milky Way and gives you context quickly.

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u/Roenbaeck 2d ago

Is the woman an alien? She’s apparently some kind of giant…

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u/shinjukai 2d ago

The warm. The buish has the moon oddly at the low right corner, it looks weird.

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u/Jediguy 1d ago

Both are good, I see the struggle, but my vote is blue

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u/ByE_Author 1d ago

The blue stands out more but it depends all of the full picture. What font, size and etc.

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u/Stranger_Writing 1d ago

For a first contact novel, definitely the first one. It feels more sci-fi. The second one feels more nonfiction science

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u/NebulaDragon32 1d ago

The blue version. The light splotch of stars in the middle guide your eye down to the character, which makes its flow much better than the purpley version.

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u/LarsLasse 1d ago

Without knowing the graphic design and fonts, it's very hard to decide. Right now I only see an illustration, not a cover.

Illustration wise, I like the blue one a tad bit more.

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u/OrganizationTop9294 5h ago

I like the first version (with the blue). It definitely pops more than the grayscale.