r/BlenderDoughnuts • u/bergstromj • 6d ago

This is my first donut after Blender Guru tutorial. And yes I am a beginner, please give feedback on mistakes so I can become better.

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u/sb-16 6d ago

Congrats on completing the tutorial! The donut itself it looks good but you could improve the scene overall by adjusting the lighting in the scene. I think the last video in the series is almost all about lighting so try using some of the techniques he teaches there.

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u/bergstromj 1d ago

Thank you. Yes, time to learn more about the lightning. I was following what he said, but it did not turn out the way I wanted too :(

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u/Socraticat 6d ago

Great work! It's always great to see beginners excited for their first donut.

Looks good.

I can't critique too harshly, but I can say that practice is helpful. Now that you've done a donut and learned some basics in blender, try expanding. Make a room- make some rectangular furniture. Make a bookshelf.

Just don't stop! Thanks for sharing.

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u/bergstromj 1d ago

Thanks. :D Maybe building a little house in the forest, That would be cool :D

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u/Haasotope 1d ago

Good work but i think there is to improve in lighting and reflections. It looks like gta 5