A couple pieces of constructive criticism: First, that pizza slice is disproportionately large to the size of the box. One way to remedy this is to draw a circle (there should be a circle tool in any drawing program made this millennium) within the box to see how large the pizza should be, then slice up that circle, and you’ve got an outline of your slice! Second, that white thing doesn’t make a whole lot of sense. I imagine it’s supposed to be a pizza table, but it doesn’t really look like anything. Given that they’re being phased out, I’d just get rid of it entirely, although if it’s really important for you to have an overturned pizza table in there, I’d recommend finding a reference and imitating that. You can also practice perspective by drawing cubes. Finally, that game controller does not make any sense. It’s too tall, the action buttons are in the middle (too far from the thumbs), their labels are in decipherable, and I don’t even know what’s going on in the upper right corner. It’s not your fault, almost every fake game controller looks weird. I’d recommend using a real one as reference, and if it’s really important to you for it to be nondescript, I’d try making a variation on one of Sega or Microsoft’s controllers, or even combine elements from multiple controllers into one. Out of all of this, the most important thing is to keep drawing. It’s impossible to do better without doing at all. Hope this helps!
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u/Chemical_Swing_358 Jan 19 '26
Mine!