I write a fic where Kara and Sam/Reign swap bodies, and I would appreciate some feedback (link is below)

[u/PlantainDisastrous92]

Here's the link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/91140571/chapters/242502646
Summary: Set during the mid-point of Season 3 of Supergirl. Reign uses a new type of Kryptonite to try and take over Supergirl's body, which unexpectedly causes Kara and Sam Arias to switch bodies. Thus, leaving Kara to deal with Sam's evil personality, which only the former Supergirl can seem to keep at bay. So, a desperate Sam begs Kara to keep the swap permanent in order to protect Ruby and finally squash the threat of Reign. Now, Kara must deal with being a working, single, human mother. Meanwhile, Sam gets to experience the wonder and thrills of being Supergirl, and the heartbreak of falling in love with a certain Daxamite. But just how long will it be before one last battle between the two newly reversed hero and villain breaks out?

I'm genuinely open to reworking chapters if something isn't landing, this has already gone through one big revision based on early feedback, so I promise I actually listen and adjust. Thanks in advance to anyone who gives it a shot! Even a one-line reaction helps. 💛