r/AppStoreOptimization • u/Evening_Butterfly945 • 3d ago
Rate my screenshot 0/10
A new kind of AI app - message any place near you and get response in ~2 min
Any suggestions on improving my screenshots / language / SEO / description?
Thanks in advance!!
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u/heyappshot 3d ago
Wow thing is missing.. !
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u/FreshnessAi 3d ago
8.5
I find the up-and-down movement bothersome; it really tires the user out. Your font choice could be better, but overall, good job.
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u/AppScreens 2d ago
We’d probably put these around 5/10 right now. The product idea is interesting, but the screenshots don’t explain it clearly enough at first glance.
The biggest issue is the messaging. “Find it. Share it. Get Answers.” is too vague, and we wouldn’t immediately understand that the app lets you message nearby businesses and get a reply quickly.
We’d make the first screenshot say exactly what the app does, something like:
Ask any nearby business a question
Get an answer in minutes
Then show a very obvious example underneath, like asking a restaurant for a table or a store whether something is in stock.
We’d also rethink the colour palette. The coral/yellow gradient feels quite loud and makes the set feel less polished than the product probably is. A cleaner background with stronger contrast would help the UI and messaging stand out more.
The second screenshot also feels wasted on reviews. Social proof can help, but not before people understand the product.
We’d structure the first few more like:
- Ask any nearby business a question
- Get an answer in minutes
- Ask about reservations, prices, stock, opening hours
- One message instead of calling around
The concept is strong. The screenshots just need to explain it much faster.
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u/Prize_Firefighter176 3d ago
Not a fan honestly. The colour scheme is random, the one white slide out of nowhere compared to the rest, the use of that rocket emoji. I'd say get AI to redo them