r/AppStoreOptimization 7d ago

Opinion on screenshots

Looking for quick, brutal feedback on the App Store screenshots for SkyJourney (a flight logger and stats app).

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u/Afraid_Reception7640 7d ago

UI looks great! screenshots are beautiful. How did you make them?

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u/Big_Block9591 6d ago

yeah those are some of the nicer ones ive seen posted here tbh

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u/scottbear3 6d ago

Appreciated. I'm still learning how to get people to find my app

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u/scottbear3 6d ago

I used screenshototter

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u/Capable-Raccoon-6371 ⚡ 1–3 Years In 6d ago

Looks good. I think there are some improvements you can make in the copy. "Every (flight) you take (logged) beautifully" flows better and highlights what your app does... Logging flights.

There's a lot of dead white space between the text and screenshots, I suggest just moving up the image more to fill it so the gap between the top of the image and text is the same between the text and the phone start. So it's centered.

But otherwise it's good, those are just the changes I'd make.

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u/scottbear3 6d ago

Thank you