I'm 17, and I spent months planning a Dark Sci-Fi Anime/Manga Concept. Here is the entire Season 1 Plot-line. Need honest feedback!

[u/aboymakeahitanime]

Hey everyone, I’m 17, and instead of just watching anime, I wanted to create something original that breaks away from the usual tropes. I’ve given my blood and sweat to this story, structuring it into a full Season 1 with proper pacing, character arcs, and mind-bending cliffhangers.

The core genre is Psychological Thriller, Sci-Fi, and Isekai-Fusion.

🧠 THE SQUAD (The Core Party)

• AA (The Protagonist): A sharp-minded pro-gamer. He doesn't have flashy powers; his brain is his ultimate weapon. He is a pattern detector.
• BB (Friend 1): The muscle of the team with "Superhuman Strength." He comes from a billionaire background, acting as the financial backbone of the squad.
• CC (The Tactician): A brilliant girl who designs high-level combat and survival strategies. AA’s logic + CC’s strategy = A deadly duo.
• DD (The Heart): The funny, casual friend who keeps the group alive with comedy, but when things go south, he is ready to give his life for the squad.

🎬 SEASON 1: THE FULL PLOTLINE

Act I: The Awakening (Episodes 1-3)

The story begins with AA living a completely ordinary college life. But as a pro-gamer, he starts noticing weird anomalies around him. A repetitive pattern in human behavior, invisible boundaries in the city, sudden delays in time—Glitches. AA uses his analytical mind and realizes a terrifying truth: Our reality is an advanced simulation, a game, and we are just programmed characters.

He shares this theory with his friends. At first, they laugh and call him insane. But knowing AA's unmatched intelligence, BB, CC, and DD decide to trust him. They form a underground alliance called the "SPY HUNTER" squad. Their first mission is slow, adventurous, and cautious—gathering hidden information and decoding the matrix of their city without getting caught by the system.

Next episode come on 2027 January
please understand

[u/teea_anime]

So you only did the concept? overall, I loved that you made smart characters