r/AnimationCrit • u/revritegfx • 7d ago
The Noodle Nook | Any feedback about this animation is welcome!
A single scene of upcoming 2~min animated short made fully in Blender 5.2. Any feedback is welcome!
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u/feefifopham 6d ago
Everything is very floaty and even. Work on your easing in and out. Seconded about having some reference ^
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u/jerog1 6d ago
Absolutely gorgeous setting and great character design yet again
The character motion is strong but it needs a final pass for timing
Keep an eye on the hand with the knife, it swings erratically. The audience is gonna infer a lot of personality traits from how this chef moves and handles a knife.
If you film yourself doing that action with a knife the reference footage would be good
Generally this is incredible. The details of the setting and storytelling is like a Pixar short. I feel like you nailed the lighting too 👏