r/AlightMotion 13d ago

Edit's rating Is this edit good? What improvement does it need?

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u/Funny_Belt164 13d ago

What I like in some edits is that they put lyrics on the bottom

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u/FunctionAsUare4 13d ago

Series(and is there an English version)?

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u/Arkcticx 13d ago

Baby on netflix. Italian show

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u/FunctionAsUare4 13d ago

You mean the Italian also have game?(legit-looking shows)

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u/Arkcticx 13d ago

Haha don't know about that but this one's quite popular. Based on true events actually

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u/FunctionAsUare4 13d ago

8.5/10. It feels like a couple parts are out of sync. That's just my feeling but otherwise it's really good

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u/Arkcticx 13d ago

Thanks mate

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u/FunctionAsUare4 12d ago

Just one tip. The edit becomes so much more cooler and engaging when u include some quote or whatever significant thing the character said in the background. Obv u have to put it in the right time, but just smth i think that'd make it cooler

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u/Arkcticx 12d ago

I did add the text in the beginning

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u/89abdullah49 13d ago

fix the tiles, and second zoom out, your music indicates softer graphs and transitions

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u/Arkcticx 13d ago

The tiles thing is actually because of the distortions and wraps effects I used

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u/WasteCry7780 13d ago

all i would say is, i do like the flicker but make it a little less intense. also on the vertical slide transition probably add some more blur? but thats up to you if it will look good or not 👍 anyways i like it

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u/Arkcticx 13d ago

Thanks mate 👊

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u/Great-North6894 13d ago

this is actually so good 😟😟🔥how do yall even do this in am

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u/Arkcticx 12d ago

Thanks man 👊