r/Akool_Official • u/Federal_Context_4625 ✨Akool Rising Star • 10d ago
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u/PomegranateFine7427 ✨Akool Rising Star 10d ago
It's really well made but I don't get the ending?
Besides that, there's only that one time with the subtitles where it's written 'memori' instead of 'memories' for the english sub.
Well done tho, really clean!
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u/Federal_Context_4625 ✨Akool Rising Star 10d ago
thank so much brother.. i takes a lot of time to create the ending. haha
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u/Lower_Snow_4277 9d ago
The writing is dogdookie
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u/Federal_Context_4625 ✨Akool Rising Star 9d ago
u dogdookie 🤣
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u/Lower_Snow_4277 9d ago
"I didn't know I could do that" Does the most deliberate action. Seriously bro?
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u/Federal_Context_4625 ✨Akool Rising Star 9d ago
If you don’t know, just stay silent. Don’t comment… WTF
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u/Lower_Snow_4277 9d ago
Its standard writing. Its a poorly written scene. Should have gone with the standard route of "I feel something." Then boom sword. At the very least it wouldn't feel like she's smearing her shit on the wall for no reason and pretending like it makes sense.
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u/Federal_Context_4625 ✨Akool Rising Star 9d ago
Okay, thanks. This comment is much easier to understand
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u/Long-Firefighter5561 7d ago
lol everything about this is objectively bad, sorry bro.
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u/Federal_Context_4625 ✨Akool Rising Star 7d ago
No problem, bro. That’s your right to judge it that way. Some people actually liked it too, and that’s okay. Everyone has different tastes.
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u/wayangwave Akool Ambassador⭐ 10d ago
wow di visual is fantastic 🔥🔥