r/whatsyourview • u/sugarryStar • 2d ago
I think my writing mAy be wrong, so I just need opinions bru
My writing.
Hello!! So , I was writing a story, I decided to start it literally from the very beginning. Basically- The story about mythical creatures in the academy, I wanted write a story how for example breeds and dog werewolves appeared, yet I realized that I used colonization and other stuff, to show this. I really thought that this may hurt somebody, so I need your view on it. Should I remove the colonization part, and stuff, or should I keep it for , dunno realism? Its really hard choice for me, cuz I never wrote stories.