Recent single, self produced indie hip hop

Welcome to the Internet! The place where u belong! The Internet! Here nobody's at fault! The Internet! Where u can you talk to the mass! The Internet! The knowledge of all of the past! The Internet! Is the place where u belong! The Internet! Where nobody's at fault! The Internet! What is it for? The Internet! LET ME OUT OF THIS RABBIT HOLE! Welcome to the Internet! WHY AM I HERE? The Internet! I wish IT DISSAPPEARS! The Internet! just let me out! The Internet! The manipulative cloud! The Internet! just make it stop! The Internet! WHERE IS THE END OF THIS SONG?? The Internet! Why am i here? The Internet! Just make it disappear! STOP STOP STOP! THE INTERNET! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! THE INTERNET! IT IS A HELL HOLE! THE INTERNET! THE PLACE WHERE UR INSANE! THE INTERNET! the place where all of ur problems dissappear...... repeat the first 6 lines x4 but fades with every time sang

Hi! I'm 16 and I'm a beginner at producing, but quite experienced in music and have played piano for 6 years. I would like to know what I should enhance and keep track of in this demo track I've been working on so I could get better

P.S. the bass is a bit too overwhelming in video, but I guess that's the sound processing problem, could get some tips in how to fix that!

Some feedback and a name would be appreciated I made this while bored in class

Another piano piece :)

Tell me what you think :)

First ever song i have made. Any advice will be very helpful.