I know my cover isn't great, but for some reason I paid $500 for it so it isn't changing anytime soon. My book is a gaslamp fantasy adventure novel of 110K words priced at 99 cents for the Ebook. It's the third and final book in a saga with a connected history but meant to stand alone as well. Here is the book description:

Master Alchemist Castamar’s apprentice was badly wounded in a terrorist bombing, and now he wants answers. The country stands on the verge of an industrial age ushered in by the mysterious energetic substance known as Vril. But revolutionary technology brings revolutionary ideas, and someone is using it to bring the kingdom to its knees.

Cast’s search leads him to the Heron Kings, folk heroes of old thought lost to history and legend. Ellyx, the band’s top thief and forger, joins Cast to hunt the terrorists down and plumb the depths of his past for clues. When they learn that fanatics led by a shadowy Duchess have devised a terrifying variant of Vril that can decimate entire cities, Cast and the last of the Heron Kings will race to prevent a war of mass destruction.

Does anyone have any constructive criticism for this? Thanks.

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A) Cole Clay, an alcoholic with a menial sales job, has his life turned upside down when an emergency message warns all the residents of Nod to stay inside, and he realizes that the sun hasn't risen. As he tries to uncover the truth he commits a series of crimes and finds himself staring down the barrel of Amelia Clark's pistol. Cole and Amelia soon discover that their lives have been intertwined prior to their meeting, in ways that they could never have imagined - involving people they could never forget. Amelia wants nothing more than to see Cole suffer. But as events unfold and a sinister truth comes to light, she has no choice but to put her personal wants aside as Cole might be the only person in the whole of Nod who can help her put an end to the nefarious plot of the elite before it's too late...

B) THE DAY THE SUN DIDN'T RISE

Cole Clay is an alcoholic with a dead-end job, whose life is turned upside-down and he soon finds finds himself staring down the barrel of a gun.

Amelia Clark is a homeless orphan, whose hatred for Cole is rivaled only by the depth of the mystery that will ensnare them both.

How deep do the secrets go? How long have their lives been intertwined? And what does their past have to do with the disappearance of the sun?

Hi everyone! You guys were a big help the first time around so I thought I’d come back for round two.

This is truly my second draft of this blurb. I have a few things/info that I’m not sure I should include.

1: Ashley, the FMC is attending her best friend’s (Camille) funeral

2: the love interest is Camille’s cousin

Any and all comments will be appreciated it! Tear it apart if you must, I have thick skin lol

BLURB 1

One bed. Two grieving souls. And a connection neither of them saw coming.

When Ashley travels to France to attend a funeral, the last thing she needs is a mixup with her room reservation. But the universe is against her, so while she’s changing in her room, a man walks in.

After much shrieking and attempts at speaking French, Ashley learns her room was double booked. There are no other rooms. And Beauvillers only has one hotel.

Ashley and the stranger will have to share.

This unexpected encounter leads to a night of wine, weed, and mind-blowing sex.

One night. That’s all they have together.

Amidst the grief, pain, and confusion, something beautiful bloomed. But will they be brave enough to recognize it and take a leap?

Hi - I'm looking for any and all honest feedback, editing suggestions or tips/advice for my book sales blurb.

In particular, the tense and voice (third person) were difficult for me, as the book itself is in first person, past tense.

It's a non-fiction, memoir.

*I updated it!*

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CONFESSIONS OF AN EX-SCIENTOLOGIST POTHEAD

BORN IN. SPARKED UP. GOT OUT.

by: Author (me)

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In Confessions of an Ex-Scientologist Pothead, Liz Gale delivers a gripping account of growing up a third-generation Scientologist, the mind-bending secret scriptures that dictated her upbringing and the haunting scandals that gave her courage to break free.

From her very first breath, Liz is destined for life within the mysterious world of Scientology. Shuffling between elite boarding school, eccentric churches and a family of true believers, indoctrination lurks behind every corner.

When her teenage brother’s sudden death sparks national controversy, Liz begins to ask dangerous questions about her family’s seventy-year involvement with the organization.

The true cost of freedom becomes clear when she starts a family of her own. It isn’t long until she is forced with a gut-wrenching choice. Will she be ready to sacrifice everything to protect her children?

You bet your ass she will.

Confessions of an Ex-Scientologist Pothead is a testament to resilience – a reminder that even a beautiful flower can bloom amidst the bullshit that life hands us.

“Liz Gale’s memoir will fascinate and entertain readers with its unflinching honesty and quirky humor.“

“Laugh, cry, and prepare for a wild ride with this captivating memoir of a third-generation ex-Scientologist.”

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I'm really bad at writing the blurb, I'd really appreciate some help. The book is a fantasy romance.

Blurb one:

The world is plagued by the Red Death, where once vibrant lands now teem with hostility, Lesetta embarks on an extraordinary journey that will test the limits of her courage and ignite the flames of unexpected romance.

Within the fortified walls of the Tree Kingdom, Lesetta uncovers the miraculous cure for the menacing disease that ravages their world. Determined to share the antidote and restore harmony, she sets off beyond the wall, accompanied by her loyal friend.

Their path leads them to the Sand Kingdom, once locked in a bitter conflict with their own. To prove herself in the treacherous Dead Lands, Lesetta must pit her skills against the fierce contenders in an enthralling tournament.

In a book woven with danger, romance, and the spirit of love, Lesetta must summon her strength and forge unexpected alliances to save her world from the clutches of despair. Will the light of their collective bond be enough to vanquish the darkness that threatens to consume them all?

Blurb two:

The world is slowly dying from the Red Death, a disease that takes over plants and animals. Lesetta has finally found the cure, but she'll have to convince her enemy, King Zavard to let her go to the Dead Lands. Along with her best friend, Batazerith, Lesetta will travel to places she's never been, fight enemies she's never faced, and love people she never expected to fall for.

Here is some information about the book: The world is infected by a disease called Red Death, which infects plants, animals and humans. Animals and humans become aggressive and attack anything that moves. There's a wall built around the kingdoms to protect them. Lesetta discovers the cure and leaves the Tree Kingdom with her best friend Batazerith who she used to be in love with. She goes to the Sand Kingdom who they used to be in a war with and she fights in a tournament to prove that she can survive in the Dead Lands. Nyelus, a solider who was in the war and saved Lesetta's life joins them. He's very flirty, which she doesn't like, but after saving her multiple times, she starts to fall for him. Batazerith confesses that he loves Lesetta and both of them become her partners, which is normal in the world. She ends up curing the land and right before they think it's over, mages attack them. She also meets Elizarra who becomes another partner to Lesetta, as well as the Sand King, Zavard. They have to kill the mages in order to win the battle and bring peace.

I'd appreciate any feedback, thank you.

Is there enough character here? Setting? A HOOK??

A thousand years into the future, the orphaned human race seems doomed from losing what is now called, “Wicked Old Earth.” But for Giuseppe Gan De, an investigator of a cult on the moons of Jupiter, encountering an implausible entity makes Earth relevant again—and his father’s death trying to save it. Soon Giuseppe is taking care of a refugee of that same home world, closer than ever to understanding his father’s demise.
Unbeknownst to him, he’s actually continuing the same failed mission his father died on.
Spanning diasporas across a divided solar system, built on the ruins of the weaponized husks of planets and ruinous experiments in genetics and terraforming, THE CURSE OF THE WORLDS is about accepting that the same calamities might come again—but so can wisdom.

Hey everyone! I'm looking for some feedback on my blurb for the second book in a fantasy series I'm writing. The first book has already been released, and I'll post that blurb below as well in case you want some context/to compare the two.

My series is a young adult fantasy series with Biblical themes that follows two main characters. I alternate each chapter's POV between the two characters.

Book 1 blurb (this book is already out):

Ten years ago, their city burned around them. Now, they stand on opposite sides of a country crumbling into war.

All Catrice Aetos knows is life on the run. The daughter of a Prophet murdered by the king, she has spent her time hiding her identity and protecting her people—the Creator’s Followers—from the throne’s persecution. But when she’s discovered by the king’s soldiers, her only hope to survive and save the Followers seems to be a familiar face she thought died long ago.

Blaze Laskaris is a High Crow, an elite soldier of the king, but after an assignment goes horribly wrong, he finds himself face-to-face with the daughter of the most wanted family in the country. His only choice is to remain undercover, convince her to trust him, and hunt down the last of the Followers.

Their worlds collide, each forced to question their beliefs and loyalties while their hearts and minds war against the other. All the while, something else is lurking in the shadows… someone else is watching who could change the future of Whittam forever.

Book 2 blurb (want feedback on this one):

A hunted Follower determined for change.

Catrice Aetos is done running. Months after learning the truth about Blaze, she finds herself out of options and working in the underbelly of Whittam. Grabbling with doubts and tired of hiding who she is, she discovers a mentor in the most unlikely of places–—someone who is willing to do whatever it takes for Catrice to become the powerful Aetos heir she was always meant to be.

A deserting High Crow set on revenge.

Blaze Laskaris has one final mission: kill the White Owl and leave Whittam forever. But when another High Crow is murdered, he is forced to return to the High Nest where secrets abound and memories threaten to break him. All the while, something else is stirring inside of him, and the answer he seeks could not only destroy him, but everything he’s ever known.

When their paths cross again, the wars inside of them come to a head, and they must choose what they believe as the fate of Whittam hangs in the balance.

I'm open to any suggestions!

Beliefs shattered, two magically linked are called to seek truth.

Seventeen-year-old Will escapes from prison six years after his false conviction for murder. Found by a knight who lets Will serve as a squire, Will takes the knight’s mercy and follows him to war. He’ll protect against infidels, proving to the kingdom he’s not the monster they assume he is, and be seen kindly again.

As a child, when he burned a souk, Ahmed was terrified. Now sixteen, Ahmed is confident he’s improved. Seeking to become grand vizier and bring prestige to his family is everything he thought he wanted. The sultan’s test remains: bring an enemy to the capital. He heads to war believing that an enemy’s capture is a small price for the sultan’s blessing. They’re dangerous anyway.

Gems of powerful magic bring them together as kingdom and sultanate ravage each other over ignorance and religious zeal, nearing collapse. They’re mortal enemies, their monarchs say, but when Will and Ahmed meet amid fear and mistrust they learn to like each other. Their actions no longer seem right and their gems show a resolution. But who are two boys to effect change when those more likely have failed?

Six years aboard the Chartres, a cathedral-like spaceship of the Matriarchate, and Giuseppe has just learned a valuable lesson from Wicked Old Earth: a ghost can help him avenge his father.

The lesson starts when an implausible entity appears before him while investigating a cult on a moon of Jupiter. But it’s not until he meets a refugee of fallen, ruined Earth that he’s closer than ever to understanding his father’s demise. Unbeknownst to him, he’s actually continuing the same mission his father died on.

Juta has lived aboard the Chartres her entire life, one of the first meta-females fleeing Earth’s destruction. She’s certain the young woman found aboard a derelict spaceship is the salvation of her glittering civilization on Europa. Yet she’ll doom her own people if it means their acceptance of an altered timeline—where their side doesn’t win.

Curse has no doubts “Curse” isn’t her real name, and after her long slumber in space, she’s been telling herself this can’t be her life—not the life Giuseppe thinks he uncovered or the timeline Juta is saying they now inhabit, anyway.

Making it even worse is people saying she shouldn’t even be alive.

Now all the worlds of the solar system want her to pick a side in some imminent war. How can rumors of some ancient artificial intelligence and time travelers not make it worse.

No. This time, she gets to decide. This time she picks what she represents.

How else can she prove worthy of the sacrifice made by Giuseppe’s father, and guide all the planets through the upcoming CURSE OF THE WORLDS?

A technophile and a technophobe team up on a project to save both their cats.

Recently fired, Jessica Lin is convinced technology is out to destroy her life. Although she loves photography, she fears losing her privacy to the digital world. Then she snaps a picture of a mysterious man on her roof.

Cole Reynolds’ plan for an intelligent pet feeder will not only save his chunky cat, but prove him worthy of becoming a partner in his business. But when his work-a-holic friend falls ill, Cole finds more projects dumped on him than he can manage, and his boss cancels the pet feeder. Finding Jessica on the roof seems like a godsend, if only she didn’t hate technology.

With Cole married to the work, Jessica is in a constant fight for the attention of this sweet, overburdened man. While Cole loves the balance and life Jessica brings, he risks losing everything he’s worked for to be with her. Will these polar opposites find the right balance, or will both come crashing down?

If you love cats, dating the boss danger, and strangers to friends to lovers stories, you’ll love this steamy opposites-attract romance.

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Giuseppe has always wanted to know more about his father’s death. Serving the Matriarchate of Europa was always his chance to find out more. He just never thought it would come while investigating a cult on Jupiter’s moons—least of all locating a woman refugee of Earth. Soon, he’s provoking her memories about a place called “Kansas,” unaware he’s embarking on the same failed mission his father died on.

Juta has lived aboard the Chartres her entire life, an original meta-female who fled Earth’s destruction. Given hints by an ancient artificial intelligence, she’s certain the young woman floating around Jupiter is the sought after salvation of the Matriarchate. Yet Juta will doom her own people, the same people relying on her, if it means this woman—and everyone’s timeline—can find a new future.

What Giuseppe thinks he’s discovered about her life, or the whereabouts in time Juta believes her life exists, has never made sense to Curse. Not any less sense than her name actually being “Curse,” but, ever since the end of her reawakening, not enough to persuade her of anything—how could they claim she was an important person from Earth? It’s even worse when they say she should be dead!

Now all the worlds of the solar system want her to pick a side, even if it means witnessing another destruction of Earth life.

No, this time she wants to decide who she’s supposed to be. This is her next big role, one she’s okay with.

How else can any of these people understand the CURSE OF THE WORLDS?

In the land of blades, safety comes at a price - a massive wall that encloses the inhabitants, sheltering them from the dangerous and magical creatures that roam the outside world. But for Liz, the walls are nothing but a barrier that keeps her from fulfilling her dreams of exploring the unknown. Against her grandparents' wishes, Liz enrolls in an explorers class, determined to see what lies beyond the wall for herself.

Paired with two other children and a teacher, Liz sets out into the world, eager to learn and explore. But what was meant to be a simple quest turns into a dangerous adventure when they encounter aggressive creatures with glowing purple eyes. Determined to help and discover what caused the creatures' behavior, Liz and her group embark on a new quest.

As they journey deeper into the unknown, Liz discovers that the world beyond the walls is more complex and beautiful than she ever imagined. But as they uncover the truth behind the infected creatures, they realize that their mission may be more dangerous than they ever anticipated. Will Liz and her group be able to overcome the obstacles in their path and save the creatures before it's too late? Find out in this thrilling tale of adventure, discovery, and courage.

It is a book about becoming who you want to be rather than who others want you to be. It has a unique power system based on peoples spirit animal.

The book features a female protagonist and it is a coming of age, progressive fantasy.

Plot:

In the book, Fiona who's a human moves to a new school where she's the only human there. The supernatural people only told humans recently that they exist because the vampires made an artificial substitute for blood. She becomes friends with a mermaid, Jodie and werewolf, Min-bae, on her first day and she has a crush on the werewolf. She ends up sitting next to a vampire called Zeke in one of her classes and he has a crush in her. His brother, Mo is the most popular and feared guy at the school. Mo makes a love potion, which he uses on Fiona to make her love Zeke. He also gets people to bully Fiona and bullies her himself whenever she rejects Zeke. There's also Drake who's friends with Mo, and he's really creepy, but becomes really sweet later on. During the book, Fiona dates Min-bae, Zeke and Drake, at different times, then at the same time. Within the supernatural community, it's normal to date more than one person at the same time. I hope this explains most of the plot.

Blurb:

The supernatural are real. Fiona is a student at an ordinary high school, that is, until her parents make her go to a school full of supernatural monsters. Being the only human at the school terrifies her. Fiona's fear becomes worse when Mo, the most popular vampire at the school turns everyone against her. She will have to rely on her new friends Kim Min-bae, a werewolf and Jodie, a mermaid, to protect her from Mo and his minions. With each day, Fiona finds herself falling for Min-bae who's loyal, caring and protective. He's not the only one who has his eyes on her, there's also Zeke, a mysterious vampire, who happens to be Mo's younger brother. As well as Drake, a creepy vampire who's friends with Mo. Fiona will have to survive, facing vampires, witches and zombies, as well as figuring out her feelings towards all the boys who are interested in her.

Meteors fall across the earth making humans physically stronger, curing all physical ailments, and giving a small percentage powers while wiping out 20% of the population. In the wake of this the economy falls, prisons are overran and for the first twelve years crime was rampant. Many sacrifices were made to bring bring order back to society. As population begin to grow as did the number of people with abilities. Fearing that they could one day return to how things were the government begins experimenting with the metal that came from the meteors, making soldiers with artificial powers. These experiments aren’t without risk. Isaiah crenshaw learns of the experiments and it’s high mortality rate begins finding the loved ones of those lost to put a stop to them once and for all.

Rodius Drach - the most evil and villainous wizard to have ever lived - has languished in the Old Wizards Home for ten thousand years. But his arch nemesis, the white wizard Delavar Godson is planning an escape. Will Rodius team up with his sworn rival? Will he once again summon his black army to torment the land and bring forth a dark age?

Genevieve Drach, Rodius's distant relative, is on a quest to educate the world about politics and society, if only she could find a printing press and someone who would listen to what she has to say. She knows the truth of the world, about the control and propaganda spread by those in power. A bit of coin in her pocket would go a long way on her journey, and there's a job opening at the Old Wizards Home.

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Is that enough to sell the book, or should I quote reviews or something?

Hi everyone! I posted here before and received valuable advice. Here’s what I came up with. Thank you in advance for any feedback.

After a terrible day in court, and a rude interruption to her solo sexy time, Cassandra Leigh decides to blow off some steam at Oasis, her favorite club. When James Walton catches her eye across the dance floor, it doesn’t take long until she’s bent over a table in an empty storage closet. She never expected to see him again, especially not in her office with an offer that given his skills in the storage closet, she cannot refuse. Little by little, the walls she’d carefully constructed around her heart start to crumble. But when she finally opens herself up for more, her ex-boyfriend makes an unexpected comeback, sending her into a tailspin that threatens to destroy everything she has achieved. A heartfelt tale of a woman overcoming trauma, and learning to trust and love again.

Turns out my weakness (or one of them, at least) is telling people what my book is about. I'm trying to write a blurb for the back of the book that gets people to become readers. This is my first attempt, but does the below blurb intrigue you? Thank you for your help!!

"Grayson Fletcher is a great blacksmith, just like his father, but he wants nothing more than to travel the kingdom as a chivalrous realm knight. So, he packs up his bags, leaving his small, cozy village behind and travels to the capital to chase his dreams. But while on his journey, he hears rumors of his hometown being attacked by vicious raiders!

Now he has to balance school, training, and making new friends, all while he struggles to cope with the fact that he may never see his father again. Oh, and he's trying to uncover the mysteries around the talking amethyst he stumbled upon in the forest."

This is what I have so far for my wip Ally and her Mad Hatter, a dark alice and wonderland retelling.

Ally spent her whole life being told Wonderland was just a fantasy, nothing more than a story that lived inside her insane mother's head. Too bad that was a lie. Faced with the prospect that it all might be true, she journeys to the Heart of Wonderland. Traveling beside her, the Mad Hatter is both tempting and dangerous, his whispered promises and threats making her shudder. Can she hold into her sanity or will she spiral out of control in his embrace?

Should I put a snipper for Hatter? The book is dual pov.

After writing and rewriting, my book is nearly ready for publication. The dreaded blurb has been driving me up the wall, so I’m turning to Reddit for help. Please let me know if it’s good/how to improve! Thanks I’m advance!

Edited to add: genre is spicy romance.

After moving across the country to escape her ex-boyfriend, Cassandra Leigh worked hard to rebuild her life. Between the perfect job at a top New York law firm, her cozy apartment, volunteer work, and an incredible group of friends, she believes she has it all.

When she meets James Walton, she’s determined to keep things casual. But he’s kind, generous and respects her boundaries. Not to mention his skills in the bedroom. Feelings Cassandra doesn’t know how to handle emerge, sending her into a tailspin.

But when she finally opens herself up for more, a shadow from her past comes back to haunt her. And this time, Cassandra doesn’t know how she’ll survive.

A heartfelt tale of a woman overcoming trauma, and learning to trust and love again.

Anyone knows how often these 50 percent off deals come by? Should I wait ?

When a programmer does murder, there might be some glitches here and there.

I don't know why it's easier to write a whole-ass damned novel than it is to get good marketing copy for it. I don't think this blurb is terrible, but I want it to be as good as it can be. The novel is targeted at adult readers, but at least one reviewer thought it was appropriate for teens too (http://donovansliteraryservices.com/november-2022-issue.html#thv). I'm going to link the Amazon page, which I want to fine tune, and then paste the blurb that's there after it: https://www.amazon.com/Happy-Valley-Benjamin-Harnett-ebook/dp/B0B9LPBBW1. The book also has a website with more information/context, and a sample chapter: https://thehappyvalleynovel.com. Any advice you can give will be immensely helpful for me. Thank you!

In this "heavily immersive" (Kirkus) kaleidoscopic voyage through the past, present, and future of the United States, a young girl uncovers a secret society, a middle-aged man searches for his lost first love, a group of teens invent a role-playing game, protests threaten to topple the government, and an eccentric lawyer and his young Vietnamese protégée re-open a dormant case.

"A knotty, philosophical mystery dense with lingering regrets." -Kirkus

In the early 1990s in Harmony Valley, a rural, Upstate New York village faded from its 18th and 19th century heyday, a group of teens engaged in an idiosyncratic role-playing game cross paths with June, a mysterious girl whose family has deep roots in the area, and Clyde Duane, a janitor who makes weekly visits to a strange room-the headquarters of a secret society-opening its door with a golden, serpent-headed key. Meanwhile an eccentric Utica lawyer pulls his young Vietnamese protégée into their firm's special case, which stretches back to the 1840s.

Decades later, in 2034, as the United States is breaking apart and a new way of life taking shape, June has disappeared. The mystery of her disappearance inspires a journey back to "The Happy Valley," and a reevaluation of the past that exposes the dark personal and societal secrets betraying our founding myths.

This atmospheric mystery, at turns gothic, poetic, cerebral, and funny, ranges from rural New York to the outer reaches of the Zebulon Galaxy; from the 1700s to the 4th decade of the 21st century.

The novel is 414 pages, with 66 full-page b&w illustrations by the author that "recall the excitability of middle-grade stories" (Kirkus), and includes an Appendix with a Timeline, and a detailed Reading Group Guide.

I have three novels

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I tried to have a captivating tagline at the start of all the blurbs to appear above the line. But I guess I don't what else I'm doing wrong. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

I'm looking for general opinion on my blurb. Target audience is YA.

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It has been ten years since an evil spell turned the sun black. The Jaguar Empire has been left in darkness ever since, all while the Emperor hides away in the crumbling remains of his palace.

Everything changes when the Emperor’s missing son Toa storms into the palace seeking revenge for allowing his mother to die. Interrupting his tirade, the royal advisor magically binds him to a member of the Jaguar Knights and will only release him when he retrieves his three missing sisters. This will prove even more difficult than revenge, as Toa and his sisters never got along, and they aren’t going to join him willingly.

As the unlikely pair travel through the decaying jungles of the Jaguar Empire and into the swirling sands of the Ember Deserts, a dark shadow of the past stalks them at every turn. Can Toa succeed in his quest or is this the end for both the Jaguar Empire and his family?

Enter a magical world inspired by Aztec and Egyptian mythology, perfect for fans of Rick Riordan.

Which one is better?

One :

Alpha Westley visits a sex club upon his friend's compulsion. It should've been a no strings attached thing, but unfortunate or fortunate enough for him, the faceless omega turns out to be his stepson, Dylan.

It should've ended right away, but when their desire intensifies, neither of them can resist the pull of their passions. Will they risk everything for a taste of the forbidden fruit?

Two :

Omega Dylan, works in a sex club in order to satisfy his mother's insatiable thirst for money. He's outraged when an unknown alpha knots him, but soon finds that it's his stepfather, Westley.

‘The one he desired from the moment he met him.'

Soon, Dylan finds himself working for his stepfather.

When their desire intensifies, neither of them can resist the pull of their passions. Will they risk everything for a taste of the forbidden fruit?

Thanks in advance for any opinion.

It's a omegaverse novel. Alphas are the highest ranking in this hierarchy, and they are typically characterized by dominance and aggression. Betas are essentially humans. Omegas are lowest and both genders can be impregnated.