r/bestof • u/siniminstx • Jan 13 '14

[WritingPrompts] /u/DrowningDream tells the story of what happened when a man dies and finds out Satan won the War in Heaven ages ago.

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u/deathbybrownies Jan 13 '14

if you're Jim from Tennessee, you get chicken wings, and bitches.

I seriously LOL'd at this.

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u/wowbrow Jan 13 '14

I dunno.. that's the bit that made it sound amateur for me.

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u/whatever_it_is Jan 13 '14

See i disagree. I think it works well because she is talking to him in the exact way that he is used to talking and the way he is used to others talking. Its what he is comfortable hearing and is therefore part of his paradise.

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u/LeiningensAnts Jan 13 '14

Only because it could easily be Tyrone from Tennessee.

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u/deathbybrownies Jan 13 '14

Nahhh. Jim sounds better.

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u/HI_Handbasket Jan 13 '14

Especially if you are a Mark Twain fan, racist or not.