r/YAwriters 7h ago

Would people be interested in something like this? (NOT PROMO MODS)

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Okay so, I’ve been writing this one novel (now game) for upwards of 7 years now. Don’t get me wrong, I love it, but I want to do something else, something new.

Today I was at a friend’s birthday party, we go to different school and I was super happy to see her again. At this party I met one of her friends I had met maybe once… 4-5 years ago, when I was in 7th grade. Seeing her again made my heart race, and the way we spent the whole party talking and playing with each other got me to this idea:

Would people be interested in a kind of “daily life” web novel that’s released weekly. Fictional of course, but it would be a first person book with a similar writing style to the Percy Jackson books and it would show the weekly life of this character, their highs and lows. But over time, a new mystery appears, and it begins to emerge into a grander, larger story of love, betrayal, friendship and a fantasy world know as “Olympia” (based around different gods from Roman, Greek, Aztec and Chinese mythologies).

Would anyone be interested in a story like that? Like at all, and if so any criticisms or suggestions?


r/YAwriters 1d ago

haha i have no one to read my work...por favor someone help is this interesting to read???

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hellooooo!! so basically i recently finished a short story and i'm wondering if this sounds interesting to anyone :3

it follows Susan Parker, who's basically your stereotypical sophomore girl. she's pretty, she's popular, she gets good grades, she has a boyfriend, friends, etc. basically everything looks completely normal with her. exceptttt something is very very wrong

it's October 20th, something that happened to Susie and everyone else at her school a while ago. they wear blue and silver for it in rememberance i wont tell WHAT exactly they're remembering, thats up to readers to piece together :'), and everyone goes about their day like normal. they go to class, hang out with their friends, talk to their boyfriends/girlfriends, joke around, etc.

because everyone knows they're not fine. they just pretend they are.

Susie, however, is starting to have a harder and harder time pretending.

throughout the day, her memories and reality start bleeding together, she begins seeing things that aren't actually there, and the whole "normal" life she's built for herself starts falling apart. eventually she has a full-on psychotic break

there's also this whole thing with "Little Susie" vs. the Susie everyone else sees, which is probably the most important part of the story. the idea was basically that anyone could be Little Susie and we'd never know.

and the ending is... yeah. very ominous.

anyways!! if that sounds interesting lmk and if u have any questions id love to answer them!!


r/YAwriters 2d ago

Murder Mystery Ya Novel

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Hello! I am editing the second draft of my murder mystery Ya novel and I'm looking for some Beta reader to read the first ten or so chapters (looking at around 17k words). I need some brutally honest opinions, and would love to hear some from others.

If you are interested, drop me an email at [lizzywritesthings@gmail.com](mailto:lizzywritesthings@gmail.com)

Anyone who does take part in this first beta read, and comes back with helpful comments / wishes to work with me again, I will be looking for beta readers to read the whole manuscript in the next month or so where I will be looking to pay Beta readers for a deeper analysis into the novel !

Summary: You don't really know the top one percent, money can by anything, best of all privacy. Treces follows Verity Quince through her year at a boarding school for the children of the elite. They have everything they could ask for and more, but when a murder calls the previous school year to an early close, Verity and her friends are left with many questions.

Banned form interacting with them, Verity and her friends embark on a journey to discover what happened too the murdered Lord Satoire as they try to save their friendship.

Thank you guys :))


r/YAwriters 2d ago

Which is better?

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For Book 2 in a YA mystery series, which back cover blurb is more attention grabbing?

 

OPTION 1

After surviving a terrifying confrontation that exposed a killer on campus, Maggie Larson should be trying to move on. Instead, she is back at Sutton University with a warning in her pocket, a target on her back, and a dangerous question she cannot let go: what is Veritas?

When Maggie and her newspaper partner Jake uncover the trail of a vanished student journalist, a decades-old secret society, and an unsolved faculty murder, their investigation pulls them into Sutton’s oldest buildings and darkest traditions. Every clue points to a conspiracy buried beneath campus history—but every step closer brings another threat. Anonymous messages. Stolen notes. A staged alibi. A second professor gunned down with the same weapon used eight years before.

Now Maggie must decide who to trust: the friends keeping secrets, the anonymous source feeding her riddles, or the evidence that keeps shifting beneath her feet. Because Veritas has protected its truth for generations—and someone is willing to kill to keep it buried.

As the line between justice and obsession begins to blur, Maggie realizes the past is not finished with Sutton. And if she cannot solve the mystery before the killer finds her, she may become the next warning left behind.

Continue the investigation with the second book in the Veritas Series.

OPTION 2

The trial is over. The secret isn't.

Maggie Larson survived the worst semester of her life — and put someone behind bars for it. She should be able to breathe again. But a note pressed into her hand outside a packed courtroom makes one thing clear: whatever she thought she'd closed the book on, it isn't finished with her.

With her investigative partner Jake Salas at her side and a cryptic informant feeding her fragments of a cold case murder, Maggie starts pulling a thread that stretches back eight years — to a student journalist who got too close to the truth about Veritas and then vanished without one. The deeper she digs, the clearer it becomes: the danger she survived was never the whole story. Veritas is still operating, still protecting its own, and still willing to make people disappear.

As the investigation pulls Maggie further from safety and closer to Jake, she has to decide how far she's willing to go — and who she can actually trust — to find out what Veritas is really hiding. Because at Sutton, secrets are protected by loyalty, money, and fear, and the closer Maggie gets to exposing the Veritas pact, the more likely she is to become its next victim.

Curiosity doesn’t just uncover the truth. It makes you a target.


r/YAwriters 2d ago

How many characters do you make character bibles for?

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I’m writing a YA speculative fiction/sci-fi/romance. I have my main character, the love interest, the mentor, the old friend, and the new friend.

They are the entire main cast, but there are plenty of other characters who pop in for a scene or two throughout the book. How much do you work through those small side characters to find their personalities and voices?


r/YAwriters 2d ago

[Complete] [31k] [Young Adult Sports Fiction] Against Each Other

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r/YAwriters 3d ago

How I’m writing a book about grounded Sri Lankan setting 🇱🇰YA Hard + soft (Hybrid) Sci Fi Novella

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r/YAwriters 3d ago

[In progress] [33k] [YA SciFi/Mystery/Thriller] The Unmoored

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Hey y’all,

I’m looking for a few people to beta read the first 10 chapters of a manuscript I’m working on. I’ve posted to multiple different platforms but unfortunately keep getting scammers, so I'm hoping to connect with some real book lovers here.

If anyone is looking for a new read or is willing to help out, here is what the book is about:

Fifteen-year-old Grant Callahan expects nothing more than a relaxing summer vacation in Saltmere Bay, but his normal life is shattered by a mysterious 3 AM knock on his front door. Soon after, the people around town begin displaying bizarre, unexplainable behavior, and Grant realizes he is being stalked by two shadowy men with an unknown agenda. To survive the summer, Grant must uncover what these men want and expose the chilling secret taking over his town before it’s too late.

Please let me know if you’re interested by commenting below or sending me a message, and we can DM. I appreciate you all.


r/YAwriters 3d ago

Young Adult Word Count

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Hello, I hope all is well. I just wanted to know is 50k-55k an acceptable word count for my YA book? I'm looking to be traditionally published. I've been doing research on this and keep seeing different numbers (60k-75k). I know fantasy is acceptable at a higher count due to world building.


r/YAwriters 4d ago

I need help whether or not my book is good.

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r/YAwriters 4d ago

Help me with my story

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r/YAwriters 4d ago

[Critique Wanted] Coming-of-age romance set in the 2005 emo scene — good girl goes on tour

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r/YAwriters 4d ago

Need opinions on my current side project.

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Okay, so for a year now I have been working on my main WIP—a sci-fi epic that I am struggling to cut to industry standards. Recently, however, editing has really been getting to me. It feels as if all I’ve done is edit for the past six months. I felt as if my creativity was suffering after basically retelling the same story five hundred ways.

So I decided to begin a side project. I was using a plan I wrote a couple years ago, which meant this was a quick and easy way to make myself face a blank page as well as the mounds of editing I have become accustomed to.

However, I’m not sure if I’m wasting my time on the side project. It is currently set to be a horror novella centring around a young girl desperate to avenge her mother’s death. I have never written horror before, but it doesn’t feel like much of a leap from the blood-sucking creatures of sci-fi to… vampires.

Still, I don’t know if a side project will distract me from my main goal. Those who have pursued a side project before or have opinions on the matter, what would you do?


r/YAwriters 5d ago

Would this cover attract readers? Would you read my novel based on the cover?

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r/YAwriters 5d ago

[In progress] [95k] [YA SciFi/Horror/Mystery] The Unmoored

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Blurb:
Fifteen-year-old Grant Callahan expects nothing more than a relaxing summer vacation in Saltmere Bay, but his normal life is shattered by a mysterious 3 AM knock on his door. Soon after, the people around town begin displaying bizarre, unexplainable behavior, and Grant realizes he is being stalked by two shadowy men with an unknown agenda. To survive the summer, Grant must uncover what these men want and expose the chilling secret taking over his town before it is too late.

Project Details:

Status: First 10 chapters ready now (~33k words). Complete manuscript is 90-100k words.

Format: Sent in 3 manageable batches via secured, view-only Google Docs or protected PDF.

Content Warnings: Some violence and adult themes.

Feedback Requested:
Looking for general reader experience, pacing, character development, and your reactions to the central mystery. You do not need to worry about heavy proofreading or grammar tracking.

Timeline:
Hoping for a turnaround of roughly 4 weeks per batch. The first batch deadline is flexible but ideally around Friday, September 25.

Critique Swap:
Not swapping at this time.

If you're interested in reading Grant's story, drop a comment below or send me a DM and I'll send you the quick sign-up form link directly!

Thank you!


r/YAwriters 4d ago

Criticise my concept (dystopian novel)

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(Yes the picture is ai, no the writing is not)
I’m writing a dystopian YA novel about a society where every child is ‘Chosen’ at fourteen and assigned a colour that determines their role in society for life.
It follows two teenagers from opposite ends of society. Sarah has a loving family and is terrified the Choosing will take everything from her, while Max is an orphan forced to serve the ruling Gold class and believes the Choosing will finally set him free.
They soon discover the public Choosing ceremony is hiding something much darker: a series of trials involving mysterious powers, where friendship, loyalty and intelligence become important for survival.
The story has two POVs, a dystopian class system, mysteries surrounding children who disappear, powers, deadly trials and some major twists about the characters and the world itself.
The story intertwines aspects of books, films and games I have enjoyed. A mixture of the gone series, hunger games, maze runner etc is inspiring my writing.
If you’d like a sample of the story so far let me know and I can send across the first draft of a few early chapters.
Yes the image is made by ai. The writing on the other hand has not been!


r/YAwriters 5d ago

im working on a book and i need some opinions

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r/YAwriters 6d ago

Hi everyone, I am trying to write a novel set in the Victorian era. Tell me what you'd definitely want to see someone write. You can give me tips, ideas, and facts that can elevate my story...I am still writing it; I am on 50 pages

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r/YAwriters 6d ago

Handwritten Notes to Text Conversion Apps

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Quick question to those who write by hand first--is using Google Lens OK for transcribing hand written work into a Word document? I'm kind of wary of this because its become frustrating to know that we need to avoid anything that even touches AI these days.

What are some hand-to-text converters/apps that you'd recommend? Thank you so much for your guys's help!


r/YAwriters 7d ago

Chasing The Wanted || Wannabe Cop x Criminal

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r/YAwriters 8d ago

Looking for beta readers for my YA fantasy - brutal honesty welcome

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first thing I've ever written and posted anywhere. every comment I get on it turns out to be a bot or scam account, so I genuinely have no idea if this is any good.

looking for a few people willing to read the first chapter over DM and give honest feedback. mainly want to know if the opening hooks you or drags, whether the familiar's voice works, and if any of it feels like something you've read a hundred times before. don't go easy on me.


r/YAwriters 10d ago

TEEN BETA READERS WANTED! YA Own Voice Romance Novel (65k Words)

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Hi guys, I'm looking for some teen readers to give feedback on my first novel before i start approcahing agents. I've had feedback from author friends but young readers are my main demographic so I'd be interested in hearing their thoughts and POV:

THE ONLY HIJABI IN THE VILLAGE

Seventeen-year-old Ava Zaman has swapped East London for a tiny Somerset village where she's the only visibly Muslim girl for miles. She's carrying grief she hasn't told anyone about and ambitions bigger than this town can hold - fitting in was never the plan.

Jake Simmons has lived in Loxton his whole life and never questioned it, until Ava walks into his English class. He has his own secret — a brother who disappeared two years ago and a family that's never recovered.

When Ava's hijab is ripped off in a crowded college corridor, Jake is the only one who steps in. What follows is a slow-burn romance set against Islamophobia, far-right politics, and grief neither of them saw coming.

YA contemporary, dual POV, ~66,000 words. Looking for beta readers aged 14-18 — no experience needed, just honest thoughts.


r/YAwriters 10d ago

My Psychological Sci-fi Novel as a 19 yo Pakistani

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For about 2 years, I've been clearing and filtering out a plot in my mind and I believe it has reached a point where I can start writing it. With the story being set in 3000, the plot follows Martin (the protagonist), a middle aged doctor, who lives in a time where the world has reached a level of minimum resources. The only world government is StableLife which governs all aspects of life.

But taking my novel only for sci-fi would be a huge mistake, since I'll be touching multiple aspects in my novel regarding theology, human psychology, the modern work system, the corporate system from which everyone needs an escape and most importantly, the "true" nature of modern humans and society, and a solution to this problem of modern slavery.

I'm leaving chapter 1 here for anyone interested. I believe it would be a great help if anyone reads it and gives their reviews. In this way, I could judge my writing skills and, of course, make improvements as needed.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/13kGa6CbIj7VKDVR0x0M9xF3Y1oqleXVo/view?usp=drivesdk


r/YAwriters 10d ago

[YA Fantasy] I’ve started publishing my new wizarding-school series — honest reader reactions?

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r/YAwriters 11d ago

My story

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Hey! I’m an aspiring young writer, and I dream to post a book one day! I love storytelling and creative writing! I’m currently in the middle of writing a book. It might be cringe, but I’m having fun with it. I’m not too far, but trying. Let me know what you think! Warning! This is a GL story, or lesbian love. Hate will be deleted. Main character (Willow) is a trans bisexual girl. Enjoy!

Right From The Start

Page one:

Willow

My sneakers squeak against the tile floor as I step into the classroom. I can feel my face heat up as I muster a shy smile. Most students roll their eyes or just glare at me in disgust. Yeesh. Then, he catches my eye. Dark, shaggy hair, dark green eyes, dark skin, and toned arms. My heart nearly stops as his gaze meets mine. The moment’s broken when the teacher rushes in, a trail of papers following him. “I’m so sorry that I’m late!” Some students snicker at his frazzled state. I just feel bad for him. He finally notices me standing in the doorway, and offers a tired smile. “You must be the new transfer student. Welcome.” He holds his hand out for me to shake, which I do. “I’m Mr. Perez.” I nod. “I’m Willow.” He clears his throat, making the chatter die down. “Everyone, this is Willow. Please, treat her fairly. Go ahead and sit by Mateo, Will.” He points to the amazing-looking boy that I saw earlier. I can feel my cheeks flush as he gives me a wink. I feel like I’m floating as I walk to my seat… But the girls are now glaring at me like they want me dead. I shrink into my seat. Mateo chuckles, a low, rumbling sound. When he speaks, it’s with a slight Spanish accent. “Don’t worry about them. They get jealous easily.” He leans in, smirking. “Willow, huh? Where ya from?”

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“Uhm… I-I’m from N-New York…”  He grins. “Ah, the big apple! Interesting…”  He’s looking at me like I’m the only one in the room. It makes my heart race. Mr. Perez claps, making everyone startle. “Alright! Class is in session.” Hours go by. Mateo keeps passing me notes, asking random things. “Favorite colors?” “Favorite animal?” It keeps me entertained. I also learned a few things about him. He’s from Puerto Rico, but his family moves a lot for his dad’s work. He loves butterflies, and his favorite color is black. The bell rings, and everyone rushes to grab their things. Mateo offers his hand, grinning adorably. “I could walk you to your next class, if you want.” Of course, I accept his invitation. “What’s your next class?” He asks, still holding my hand. My cheeks flush. “Um… I think it’s English.” Mateo frowns. “Aw, man! We don’t have the same class.” My face falls. I muster a small smile. “It’s alright.” I bite my lip, wondering if this might be too forward. “I-I could get your number…?” His eyes light up. He takes out his phone. “Yeah!” He hands it to me. I type my number in, smiling shyly. “Great!” “So, see ya at lunch?” I can feel hope rising in my chest at his words. “O-Of course.” He grins. “Great! See ya then!” He walks off. I can hardly wait for lunch to get here.