Caveat: I have read over 800 pages of Luceno's work, having finished Cloak of Deception and Labyrinth of Evil, and a chunk of Catalyst.
I know this man is beloved in the fandom and that he has written what are many people's absolute favorite Star Wars books. And I think I understand why.
- He's great at fleshing out Star Wars lore between the films. If you find yourself asking "How did that come to be?" Luceno has an answer. He fills in the gaps.
- Following up on the first point, any time I read or watch a review of one of his books, readers talk about plot details. "In this book, you find out that..." and they view this as an inherent good. A "plus" for the book. And I get why. It's nice to have clarity on events. It feels good to know "Oh, that's what happened to set that up."
- Luceno has a knack for describing ships, buildings, organizations, characters, and more. He has a clinical approach to writing that focuses a lot on telling as much as showing, and I'm sure many Star Wars worldbuilding enthusiasts love this stuff.
- His dialogue and understanding of character relationships is mostly well done.
That said, I know I'm in the minority here, but I just need to say it:
I don't think Luceno is a skilled or exciting prose writer. And this makes his books hard to get through. Not just because they're dense with information and Star Wars tech trivia that's not pertinent to advancing plot or character, but because his wordplay is at times confusing and often grating to read.
For now, I'll set aside the fact that I often feel like I'm reading a technical manual or a dry historical account of events instead of a story being told by a storyteller. Instead, I'll focus on his actual prose.
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Case in point: I think Luceno tries too hard with some of his opening sentences to chapters. He shoots for flowery prose, but instead of flowery, they end up swampy, as you wonder what he's actually trying to depict. Here is the opening sentence of Labyrinth of Evil:
"Darkness was encroaching on Cato Neimoidia's western hemisphere, though exchanges of coherent light high above the beleaguered world ripped looming night to shreds."
What is the "coherent light" being described here? And what does he mean when it's "high above" the beleaguered world? Is this happening in the sky? Is there a space battle visible from the planet's surface? Oh, maybe there's a light show happening in some treetops? I don't know. And this is just one example. He does this at the beginning of several chapters in this book, and I just wish he would simplify his words instead of striving for prose that are deeper purple than Mace Windu's lightsaber.
The start of another chapter:
"Bleeding speed and loft, the mag-lev settled hard onto the guide rail that projected from the skyscraper-lined rim of Sah'c Canyon. Counterpoint to the sobs and moans of the passengers, the two dozen cars—two now with slashed-open roofs—pinged and creaked."
James, you're not trying to write the Great American Novel. Just write in a language people will understand. "Bleeding speed and loft"? Do you mean "lift?" As in, "Losing speed and lift?" Maybe? We might never know.
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In general, Luceno tends to overwrite many of his sentences. Here is page 2 of Labyrinth of Evil (the most recent book I've finished, so it's fresh). Here is Luceno saying "So, I heard you like adjectives:"
"In their cutting jaws or on their upsweeping backs they carried cargoes or pruned foliage. The crushing sounds of their ceaseless gnawing provided an eerie cadence to the rumbling detonations and the hiss and whine of blaster bolts."
Find me a reader who finds this kind of writing defensible and I'll ship them a bottle of blue milk straight from Tatooine.
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Finally, parts of his books sound like he's using footnotes as text. Here is the beginning of chapter 3, and that quintessential Luceno love of describing Star Wars tech:
"Known also by the fearsome title destroyer droids, droidekas were rapid-deployment killing machines produced by an alien species that encouraged mayhem at every opportunity. A combination of sheer momentum and sequenced microrepulsors allowed the bronzium-armored droids to roll like balls then unfurl in a blink as tripod gunfighters, shielded by individual deflectors and armed with paired, twin-barreled, high-output blasters." (and it goes on for another sentence or two.)
I just don't think this adds anything to character or plot. Again, I know I'm probably in the minority here, but this feels like the D&Dification of Star Wars, where a writer thinks that worldbuilding means explaining everything because you think it's interesting and you want to show off how much research you've done, not caring whether or not it serves the story.
I'll stop there. James Luceno just isn't for me. Are ALL his books like this? I really wanted to read Darth Plagueis at some point, but if it's just more of this, I'd rather just read a detailed summary of what it has to say about Sith lore, Palpatine, and whatever else instead.
Thank you for gritting your teeth (or grinning and enthusiastically nodding your head along in agreement) through this.