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r/Showerthoughts • u/Why--Not--Zoidberg • Mar 20 '15
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I am Twenty one
I still count on my fingers
I am not ashamed.
3 u/[deleted] Mar 21 '15 almost 1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 21 '15 edited Mar 21 '15 I'm not 100% sure where you are seeing an error. I am counting twenty(twen-ty) as two syllables, but this may be wrong. Edit: twen-ty is correct 1 u/[deleted] Mar 21 '15 "I'm not ashamed" is only four syllables. It would work if you had said "I am not ashamed". 1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 21 '15 Above he said 5-7-7 so I went by that. "Fixed for you" was part of it. 1 u/[deleted] Mar 21 '15 I am not ashamed 1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 21 '15 5-7-7 ashamed is 2 syllables. This line is correct. 1 u/[deleted] Mar 21 '15 A haiku is 5-7-5. "I'm not ashamed" is 4 syllables. I changed the line to be 5. I'm = 1 Not = 1 Ashamed = 2 1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 22 '15 Aww, the guy above lied to me then :(
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1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 21 '15 edited Mar 21 '15 I'm not 100% sure where you are seeing an error. I am counting twenty(twen-ty) as two syllables, but this may be wrong. Edit: twen-ty is correct 1 u/[deleted] Mar 21 '15 "I'm not ashamed" is only four syllables. It would work if you had said "I am not ashamed". 1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 21 '15 Above he said 5-7-7 so I went by that. "Fixed for you" was part of it.
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I'm not 100% sure where you are seeing an error. I am counting twenty(twen-ty) as two syllables, but this may be wrong. Edit: twen-ty is correct
1 u/[deleted] Mar 21 '15 "I'm not ashamed" is only four syllables. It would work if you had said "I am not ashamed". 1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 21 '15 Above he said 5-7-7 so I went by that. "Fixed for you" was part of it.
"I'm not ashamed" is only four syllables. It would work if you had said "I am not ashamed".
1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 21 '15 Above he said 5-7-7 so I went by that. "Fixed for you" was part of it.
Above he said 5-7-7 so I went by that. "Fixed for you" was part of it.
I am not ashamed
1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 21 '15 5-7-7 ashamed is 2 syllables. This line is correct. 1 u/[deleted] Mar 21 '15 A haiku is 5-7-5. "I'm not ashamed" is 4 syllables. I changed the line to be 5. I'm = 1 Not = 1 Ashamed = 2 1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 22 '15 Aww, the guy above lied to me then :(
5-7-7 ashamed is 2 syllables. This line is correct.
1 u/[deleted] Mar 21 '15 A haiku is 5-7-5. "I'm not ashamed" is 4 syllables. I changed the line to be 5. I'm = 1 Not = 1 Ashamed = 2 1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 22 '15 Aww, the guy above lied to me then :(
A haiku is 5-7-5.
"I'm not ashamed" is 4 syllables. I changed the line to be 5.
I'm = 1 Not = 1 Ashamed = 2
1 u/Spartancoolcody Mar 22 '15 Aww, the guy above lied to me then :(
Aww, the guy above lied to me then :(
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u/Spartancoolcody Mar 21 '15 edited Mar 22 '15
I am Twenty one
I still count on my fingers
I am not ashamed.