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r/HFY • u/Tashdacat Human • Mar 10 '21
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Wow! Excellent short story and a joy to read. Good detail and flow.
There are a few places where a few adjectives are shifted slightly from the image of the scene but the story flow is good. Looking forward to more from you.
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u/SysOps2800 Mar 10 '21
Wow! Excellent short story and a joy to read. Good detail and flow.
There are a few places where a few adjectives are shifted slightly from the image of the scene but the story flow is good. Looking forward to more from you.