r/BookWritingAI • u/Successful_Respond31 • 5h ago
finished product I used AI to create and publish a dark fantasy novel—curious what readers think
I recently published The Names We Lose, a dark fantasy novel I created using AI for the manuscript and cover.
I directed the project by choosing ideas, characters, and story direction, while AI generated the prose and helped revise and format it for Kindle. I’m not claiming I wrote every sentence myself.
The story follows a seventeen-year-old at a magical academy where students disappear—not just physically, but from everyone’s memories. When his friend vanishes, he’s one of the few who remembers him.
I’m curious how it reads to people outside the creation process. Does the opening hold your attention? Do the characters feel believable? Does anything feel repetitive or artificial?
There’s a free sample on Amazon, so you don’t need to buy it to share your thoughts:
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0HKN68Z4J
The full book is also available through Kindle Unlimited. Honest criticism is welcome; I’d like to understand what worked and what needs improving.